Today I learned to never, EVER attempt rhyme again. DX

Well, I won't lie, it can be rather difficult. =/

But it's one of my main forms of creative expression, so I've learned to live side by side with the concept. ^^

i thought it was pretty good.

Well this is awfully kind of you, Russ! ^^

I see you didn't hesitate to stay within the meteorological realm! xD

I can't help but adore these words because they're just so playful, yet serious--y'know?

Darn that "selfish Stratus" and "sneaky Cirrus"! Oh, and the latter excerpt has alliteration; I very much like that sound technique.

"A Crime
With not a drop
Of Reason,"

The diction of this portion is nice, and the use of drop is hilariously appropriate--it's rain, after all. The repetition of these three lines near the end gives forth a feeling of sentiment. :U

All in all, I liked it; I'm glad I could inspire you! That's the best gift a poet can give. =O