Hookay, so this is a poem!
It's the first poem I have written that is actually ending on the internets, so feel free to comment on it.
*(On that note, I will very much have recive feedback, as well as constructive crititism.)
The poem is supposed to be one written by a character of mine (Karo) from a RP game I'm participating in. It is dedicated to a special Lady that have caught his heart (Coven). Ofcurse, nothing's easy and Coven is so far... Well out of his reach. Go blame Rhana for that, but don't tell her I told you so >_>
Anyway, thanks are out to HeavyMetalMirage (http://www.furaffinity.net/user/heavymetalmirage/) for making the awesome game that is Daykia, as well as the cool NPC that's Coven!
Furthermore, there's thanks for permission to use his drawing for this (See image above).
Also, both HeavyMetalMirage and Arrowtibbs (http://www.furaffinity.net/user/arrowtibbs/) deserves thanks for returning feedback during the process.
Karo + Poem © Black-Draco
Daykia + Coven (C) HeavyMetalMirage
THE UNTAMEABLE WIND
Descent of the highland, a line of old;
Embodiment of grace, coat of snow.
Proficient of Ereis, thy talents ample;
The far reaches of the unknown thy chapel.
Roaming the lands, the roads from inn to inn;
Uncatchable, unmatchable, the untameable wind.
Joyful years have flown since the day we met;
Along the lone road on confident feet.
Blue eyes like lochs, thy paws so light and fine;
Memories plenty, most precious of mine.
As we grew to more, so did my essence;
Most saddening was the rumors of thy disappearance.
Seasons changes, slowly lone years flew past;
On journey far west I found you at last.
You had ripened very from faring wide;
Both had we changed, had feelings of mine?
Talents had increased, beauty incline;
Uncatchable, unmatchable, untameable divine.
A secret you shared, world in unrest;
Defiance of fate I tried my best.
Heavy the task given, we carried on;
I sought to protect though you needed none.
A wall seals the advance, the time is dire;
The wind caged by hands of night, thy freedom expired.
Fool, never revealed feelings of mine;
Seeks thy freedom, to splinter chains divine.
Hope for thy love, fear my feelings deny;
Indeed the choice, thy freedom will outshine.
Abolish wrongs of mine, cold have me pin;
Stunning charmer, respected confidence, untamed wind.
It's the first poem I have written that is actually ending on the internets, so feel free to comment on it.
*(On that note, I will very much have recive feedback, as well as constructive crititism.)
The poem is supposed to be one written by a character of mine (Karo) from a RP game I'm participating in. It is dedicated to a special Lady that have caught his heart (Coven). Ofcurse, nothing's easy and Coven is so far... Well out of his reach. Go blame Rhana for that, but don't tell her I told you so >_>
Anyway, thanks are out to HeavyMetalMirage (http://www.furaffinity.net/user/heavymetalmirage/) for making the awesome game that is Daykia, as well as the cool NPC that's Coven!
Furthermore, there's thanks for permission to use his drawing for this (See image above).
Also, both HeavyMetalMirage and Arrowtibbs (http://www.furaffinity.net/user/arrowtibbs/) deserves thanks for returning feedback during the process.
Karo + Poem © Black-Draco
Daykia + Coven (C) HeavyMetalMirage
THE UNTAMEABLE WIND
Descent of the highland, a line of old;
Embodiment of grace, coat of snow.
Proficient of Ereis, thy talents ample;
The far reaches of the unknown thy chapel.
Roaming the lands, the roads from inn to inn;
Uncatchable, unmatchable, the untameable wind.
Joyful years have flown since the day we met;
Along the lone road on confident feet.
Blue eyes like lochs, thy paws so light and fine;
Memories plenty, most precious of mine.
As we grew to more, so did my essence;
Most saddening was the rumors of thy disappearance.
Seasons changes, slowly lone years flew past;
On journey far west I found you at last.
You had ripened very from faring wide;
Both had we changed, had feelings of mine?
Talents had increased, beauty incline;
Uncatchable, unmatchable, untameable divine.
A secret you shared, world in unrest;
Defiance of fate I tried my best.
Heavy the task given, we carried on;
I sought to protect though you needed none.
A wall seals the advance, the time is dire;
The wind caged by hands of night, thy freedom expired.
Fool, never revealed feelings of mine;
Seeks thy freedom, to splinter chains divine.
Hope for thy love, fear my feelings deny;
Indeed the choice, thy freedom will outshine.
Abolish wrongs of mine, cold have me pin;
Stunning charmer, respected confidence, untamed wind.
Category Poetry / Fantasy
Species Rabbit / Hare
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