Can't wait for part 2 now!

Working on it nooowwww <3

Hehe wouldnt mind showing him a tour of the chocofox. Though that big cute pred is cutier hehe.

hehe, this was actually well worth a giggle.

You haven't gotten your giggle's worth until you see page 2!

I could be laughing then.

Couldn't help but giggle, very nice ^__^

More giggles at page 2!

Can't wait ^__^

I'm sure he totally didn't do that on purpose.

I look bad :<

He framed you!

No, it’s actually pretty clear from that surprised and terrified look on your face that you weren’t trying to eat him. Ironically enough, Jerberger looks more confident, sure of his actions, than you do.

looks like he's a nasty gerbil :3

Hehe ^^ Wiggles are the best

Hehehe, poor foxie!

>.< ow omg that looks so painful foshu you poor foxy that chimpmunk all flipping out on you and such! *hugs* you poor poor foxy women.

Me and Jen are going on Oprah to talk about how we have been abused by bellythrashing chipmunks

really well thats gonna be intresting.

This is wonderful, I love its adorable style ^_^ Can't wait for part 2.

Lol! I lurve the little guy! Fighting Food with Attitude!

But he doesn't know when to stop!

Well then hopefully I'll never encounter him! o_o

Heheheh. That's really cute. Nice work all over, too! You two work well together.

I thought so too <3 Hope to do more with him

woah, quite the paranoid rodent, uh ? o.o;

YES

Paranoid... gawd I was looking for that word last night when i needed a title. I really couldn't think straight anymore

Rodents normally have good reason to be paranoid. Though I find “Behind a sword” or “Behind a polite compliment” to be a more effective deterrent than hopping into their mouth. You grab the jaws AFTER your inside, and only to keep the pred from chewing. Not before she’s even got her lips around you! “Speak softly, and carry a big stick” became a phrase for a reason. No one ever says “Walk around unarmed and yell really loudly”

Your art is always awesome Foshu no matter what, I just always love it! x3
~Sascrypte

well only half of this is my art

And still, your brilliant ^^ :3
~Sascrypte

Awww, it so cute. A overdramatic / paranoid jerbil. Poor you; indigestion is a fate worst than death to predators. :)

Awesome job Foshu

Hah, his paranoia is what got him in that situation in the first place, but is too blind to actually see that.. Nice.

lol yesh, I'm really reluctant to touch him anymore

ow!
i like this!
great job!

i'll go in and get him out for ya! ^^ lol

Your character makes the best pred, even when she doesn't mean to be! =D

and jerb makes the worst prey lol

lol i wouldn't thrash around much, frogs are easy on the tummy ^^

yesh you are <3 *nibbles*

eek! everyone wants my tasty frog legs! =O

Agreed! Reluctant or unwilling preds in general are just absolutely adorable. But Foshu? Who's an adorable pred anyway? That’s just cuteness overkill.

I love how the vore plays here. The accident concept is a really nice touch, not to mention the characters are adorable (I love your vixen especially). Looking forward to part two.

I still don't think it's an accident... paranoid jerbil makes this sort of thing happen!

Well, however you want to put it. ^^ Regardless, it's a fresh, humorous way to present vore.

from looking, i'm pretty sure you did pannels 2 and 8, and ger did 3, 4, 5 and 7, and when i said did, i mean most of it atleast, well... the style of your head is a give-away XD

I did panel 1 as well, but I did all the shading!

i could probably have guessed you did pannel one :P looks like ger did pannel 6 too.

but you did all the shading? Cool

It's like an anorexic's nightmare!

LOL it is until you see page 2

hmmm, well... he's at it again. o.o
Very nice art work. I noticed a slight change in style. she's a bit thicker in the middle. n.n it is very cute!

Hips is the only thing i ever had lol

It's not any different from the ref sheet is it?

oh yeah, love foshi's wide hips :P

i make that sound so naughty XD

This comic is full of cuteness...and apparently, so are you.^^

absolutely not, that RAEGing little jerbil inside of me is definitely not cute

You're right; he's ADORABLE

STAY AWAY FROM ME

Hmm … you know, you could probably really mess with predator’s heads by systematically jumping into the stomach of every single one you can find while their asleep, thrash about in their stomach so they all know just what it feels like, then … when everyone is terrified of accidentally (or otherwise) gulping you down, start covering yourself in delicious things or swimming in other people’s foods. I’d just love to see a picture of Foshu acting exactly as she is in comments.

Any complaints if I try to draw it myself at some point? I understand a lot of people are touchy when it comes to their characters.

Well, jerb isn't normally that malicous, honestly. most people just make the mistake of eating him.

Well I know I’m not going to have that problem, I think you might actually be a little bigger than me. Bwhahaha! I am immune to accidental nomings and shall never feel the pain of a Jerberjer in my stomach. Which … would suck if someone did get in there accidentally, just like horses and bunnies rodents aren’t able to puke.


Nice to hear you aren’t malicious enough to try that, but it’s still amusing to think about.

Accidental vore is always hilarious!

I refuse to believe this was an accident!

Great comic, both parts, I love the art style and the situation - for some reason, (female) predators in unexpected/uncomfortable situations like this is what I find exciting. ^.^ And, I'm normally a predator myself... so, ouch. xD;

I just thought it was hilarious myself, it's really just a repeat of the the first one

Well, now that I finally realized that there was a first one *blushes* and checked it out, I'd say this is not all that similar (comic-wise). The first one is sweet and 'different' due you being both enthusiastic and protective/guilty, with a neat/funny twist in the end.

Despite the same premise, the execution this one was more hilarious and his antics made me feel sorry for you. :P Even if I have a thing for "forced predation" and stomach aches caused by the prey, etc. I'm a weird pred that way...

hehe, cute and funny

"Not again" xD
Yes , vore RP is not an easy one ...

xD this is so ironic! I'm used to Foshu chomping down on her tiny li'l snacks, but the one li'l guy that isn't supposed to be on the list actually puts himself in her tummy x3 No real tips on artistry... You're getting too good xD I've got nothing to critique anymore~

Can't wait to read part 2!

It's because Jerb drew like half of this lol

xD that doesn't mean you aren't doing a fantastic job

This is why I don't kiss things smaller then a breadbox.

Wowwww, your style has changed so much! ^w^

read the description, jerb drew half the panels

Merf, well...It's very good. '3'

cute! makes me regret not being a mouse anymore. The days of furcadia in The Vore Club I'd be going in everyones mouths :P

I doubt you're not getting nommed up anymore now you're a huskie

it's quite the relief that people can't eat me normally unless there's a special potion involved. Huskytaur(and husky mostly as of late) are quite hard to swallow.

Kintaro the mouse, on the other hand, I was pretty tasty according to the populous of TVC...

Yes. You should very much regret not being a mouse anymore. Er, not that their’s anything wrong with being a husky, or whatever it is you’ve turned to. No disrespect intended!

its just one of those instances where you like to torture eachother i know it

Good grief!! XD