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Page 49... Oh snap! Something bad did happen!..while playing that is...
Talk about hardball, Frijir hit it pretty hard to Nina and accidentally hit her face! :i ... (to be honest I can't help but laugh, but also feel her pain though, so sorry XD; ) but awe yes, she has a bump on her forehead now .. Ash is not amused <:[....
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Talk about hardball, Frijir hit it pretty hard to Nina and accidentally hit her face! :i ... (to be honest I can't help but laugh, but also feel her pain though, so sorry XD; ) but awe yes, she has a bump on her forehead now .. Ash is not amused <:[....
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art/characters. © Shalone Howard/me
Done in Photoshop Elements 2.0 & SAI
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 788 x 1280px
File Size 251.7 kB
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Aww, poor Frijir =< I would've told Ash to STFU...but I'm afraid Zonoya might do something a little more drastic, instead O___o; I'm scared this will have two negative impacts:
One.) Zonoya hears Ash and put him in his place.
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Two.) This will cause Frijir to become more aggressive in general.
One.) Zonoya hears Ash and put him in his place.
-or-
Two.) This will cause Frijir to become more aggressive in general.
I find it a little eerie how accurate you portray this. People judging others by their past, children picking up on those judgments and applying those same judgments to children they don't even known. I think it's a case of good story telling on your part but it's still a bit eerie.
D'awwwwww Frijir didn't mean to! He's just getting a little overzealous in his glee of having someone to play with.
... And damnit, ninth pannel, bottom left with the claws, my friends must be laying on the EPIC GHEY too much, because my first reaction was wondering how great it'd look if the text was 'SOMEBODY LOOKS FABULOUS!" and all the claws were painted pretty. XD
... And damnit, ninth pannel, bottom left with the claws, my friends must be laying on the EPIC GHEY too much, because my first reaction was wondering how great it'd look if the text was 'SOMEBODY LOOKS FABULOUS!" and all the claws were painted pretty. XD
Don't tell me this is a major turn-point to evil again. It's just kids playing. Nothing wrong with a bump. Childrens are indestructable at this age. Their parrents can comfort them...if they aren't hating eachother that is. There has to be more, then this to hate someone. The worst that could happen is that Ash and Frijir became rivals...Oh La La!
I like your comic and all and I know conflict and drama is a great way to advance the plot. But most of the time it seems everyone just has extreme mood swings and over-reacts about EVERYTHING.
By no means am I a great story-teller. But perhaps it'd be good to find a different way of, y'know... causing this conflict. I sure know when I accidentally got hurt as a kid no one (especially the other kids) got anywhere near this upset.
By no means am I a great story-teller. But perhaps it'd be good to find a different way of, y'know... causing this conflict. I sure know when I accidentally got hurt as a kid no one (especially the other kids) got anywhere near this upset.
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