For this page the dialogue has been changed a lot. And some of the art as well.
I think I'm okay with how it is now.
In the beginning the dialogue made the purrloin seem like a giant asshole (which... she kinda is).
But I felt like it would make her too unlikable for a main character, so I changed it a ton of times.
I realize that there's a fine line between a dickish but redeemable villain as a main character, and a character that's so mean that it becomes unpleasant to read.
And since this is one of my few comics where I don't want to rely on very random stupid stuff to lighten the mood I'm trying to get the balance right.
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I think I'm okay with how it is now.
In the beginning the dialogue made the purrloin seem like a giant asshole (which... she kinda is).
But I felt like it would make her too unlikable for a main character, so I changed it a ton of times.
I realize that there's a fine line between a dickish but redeemable villain as a main character, and a character that's so mean that it becomes unpleasant to read.
And since this is one of my few comics where I don't want to rely on very random stupid stuff to lighten the mood I'm trying to get the balance right.
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