awesome work

Thanks!

Wow, this is some awesome stuff. And you're right, page 33 is really over the top. That's incredible. Plus, your pencils have really brought Kit to life in a charming manner.. it's a real pleasure to peruse the story!

I really appreciate your comments here. I have been experimenting with different types of graphic storytelling and it's nice to get feedback. It helps me figure out what's working and what's not.

You're welcome! I find this really works well, though I'm sure you'll find a way to improve on it in ways that Those Who Feedback wouldn't see; I can't say anything negative really.

For example, I think the succinct text is very effective, and conceptually is flawless. One or two paragraphs is easily absorbed, and lets you set your attention on the picture again with additional perspective (that's how I did it), before looking at the next one to see what's happening now. :)

You already employ these extra spices for some pages (like the colours), which are always a good idea. It's nice to have a few dynamics besides the subjects and perspectives. Another interesting one concerns the pages with two adjacent pictures. I think it's like hitting the center layout of a comic book, which I've always found a fascinating thing to exploit. Sure, gargantuan undead dragons are impressive when you draw them well, but you put the picture in there with a certain charm of wonder too.

Neat story. want to follow it. is it a weekly or better?

For now, it's going to be slow--I have conventions over the next few months and it slows down my output. However, I will be talking to Jim at Marcon at the end of May, and a suspect a new update will follow.

Oh, by the way, just in case you're a perfectionist (aren't all artists?), you wrote 'Kit' where you should've written 'Tabitha' near the end of page 6.

By the way, I really love the subtle blues and beiges that creep in.. nice touch. :3

Oh good lord, dyslexia strikes again. I'll remind my webmaster to fix my error. Poor webmaster, I keep him very busy with stuff like this...

Thanks for the color comments. That blue to brown transition can be nice.

I wasn't really expecting to enjoy this form of abbreviated storytelling, This is very pleasant and very well done.

Thanks! As mentioned above, it's a bit of an experiment for me so it's good to know that it is working for people.

Updates! Yay! Puppy dog eyes work every time.
*Scurries off to check the updates*

Thank you!

That's quite a beautiful tiger, I love how you draw it! They're giving me a headache to sketch out right now.

I still have trouble with the stripes some time. They're fun, but yee.

Holy cow, Susan...I never saw any of that stuff before! I looked at all of it from the link you provided. GREAT work!!!!!!!
I really look forward to seeing more of the Travels of Kit!
(I think it's some of your best comics work to date!)

Thanks Sandy. I remembered when we were both doing work for Arrow Comics. I have loved comics ever since and I've been on the lookout for methods to make doing comics practical for me. I'll be doing more of this in the future.

I still have the original art to the cover for Tales of the Aniverse #1.(your pencils, my inks and colors) Loved that book!