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(Well, version 6 on my file but w/e)
This is a corrected(ish) version of the previous work in progress sketch. I've fixed many of the anatomy issues thanks to
tinder, and made a few more adjustments to various things.
I've also redlined part of it to see how they'd look before committing to changing them... even though they need changing regardless.
The setting is probably a shipping yard or warehouse of some sort - probably the former. Everytime I imagine them fighting I picture them in some sort of warehouse setting, or somewhere with lots of boxes and other things to leap and climb between.
Lemme know how this one holds up. I think the perspective going of to the top right is probably a bit too extreme but I'll hear what you guys have to say about it first.
Also feel free to point out any anatomical errors. I wanna iron out as many as possible and I'm sure this is still full of them due to the foreshortening.
This is a corrected(ish) version of the previous work in progress sketch. I've fixed many of the anatomy issues thanks to
tinder, and made a few more adjustments to various things.I've also redlined part of it to see how they'd look before committing to changing them... even though they need changing regardless.
The setting is probably a shipping yard or warehouse of some sort - probably the former. Everytime I imagine them fighting I picture them in some sort of warehouse setting, or somewhere with lots of boxes and other things to leap and climb between.
Lemme know how this one holds up. I think the perspective going of to the top right is probably a bit too extreme but I'll hear what you guys have to say about it first.
Also feel free to point out any anatomical errors. I wanna iron out as many as possible and I'm sure this is still full of them due to the foreshortening.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Doodle
Species Housecat
Size 595 x 842px
File Size 112.9 kB
Hehe, that must be purely due to the way the characters are overlapping. I drew the whole leg in there (hid it for this submission) so I can assure you it's connected :)
Still, I'll take a look at moving them around a bit more so it doesn't look like there's something up with it.
Still, I'll take a look at moving them around a bit more so it doesn't look like there's something up with it.
with the way theyre falling and the angle the windows (or at least the building theyre closest to in general) looks as if they jumped facing a little to the left, or at least the one you drew in red did, the other would have fallen from the right
but anyways, im not sure if that was intentional or im just a scrub
but anyways, im not sure if that was intentional or im just a scrub
just a little thought, you may want to shorten the shin on the leg that's semi-hidden. It seems rather large in comparison to the thigh even with the aforementioned foreshortening going on with it. That one small thing though, the rest seems great, I'd say try bringing the toes up to the heel of the top character in terms of length and that should solve the case of the "floating leg" I know it's not actually floating but it appears distended due tot he overall length. But I honestly thing that if you bring her toes back to the meeting of the arch and the heel on the top character your picture will probably be even insanely more awesome.
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