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So this was just something simple I did with my character Alira and my dad 
Hopefully...it's not too bad
Hopefully...it's not too bad
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.4 kB
I know bout the collar part hehe that's where we got the idea in a sense, however I was trying to use it as a "trained from birth" sort of thing apparently it didn't go over so well..aand as for ur second comment i'm going to guess that's a compliment and say thank you ^.^
indeed the second part was supposed to be a compliment of sorts, and no the training from birth-part doesn t really relay to the reader because of the collar thing... if you d have left that out completely it wouldn t have been that obvious that her eagerness for fighting is induced by the unclasping of the collar - instead she d just appear to be eager for some sparring
yea it was interesting but it almost felt like a second personality, when "uncolared" her "other self" takes over not so much as a "trained fighter being given the green light"
maybe keep her personality and look innocent and bubbly but a focused and determined look when she is "let out to fight"
maybe keep her personality and look innocent and bubbly but a focused and determined look when she is "let out to fight"
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