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Riddle me this riddle me that
I enjoyed creating this riddle. This is one of my first ones.
I look forward to your views. =^^=
I enjoyed creating this riddle. This is one of my first ones.
I look forward to your views. =^^=
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 90 x 120px
File Size 322 B
Hehe, a nicely worded riddle, Lucky! ^^
I think it would have only been a matter of time for me to guess "story," but Ruto's comment did catch my eye beforehand. x3
I enjoy your use of "twined" and "memory's mystic;" the latter is some nice alliteration--that's always a pleasure to read across. ^^
This poem makes excellent use of verb painting: twined, planted, poured, stirred. These aren't your average action verbs (save the last two maybe), and that's what makes them so appealing; you can visualize them more clearly. =O
I wonder what other topics you shall veil for us. =D
I think it would have only been a matter of time for me to guess "story," but Ruto's comment did catch my eye beforehand. x3
I enjoy your use of "twined" and "memory's mystic;" the latter is some nice alliteration--that's always a pleasure to read across. ^^
This poem makes excellent use of verb painting: twined, planted, poured, stirred. These aren't your average action verbs (save the last two maybe), and that's what makes them so appealing; you can visualize them more clearly. =O
I wonder what other topics you shall veil for us. =D
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