It is getting better but I am not where I want to be. Not by a long shot. Though it everything keeps improving the way it has been...I'll be doing better in no time.
Thinks I like about this one:
The pose itself is nice and dynamic and movement is obvious; High action. The chest and abs are always getting better and this is not too bad.
Things to work on:
The legs and arms are things I still need to work on. I think I need to start drawing individual muscles as shapes unto themselves instead of just trying to fit them into a pre-drawn outline. I'm not convinced that the depth I was trying to create with the foreshortened legs is working. I feel like there is a lack of foreshortening to really give it a greater sense of depth. The head and face are AWFUL...Now granted, I haven't really studied them yet. I have studied them, but I let go of them to work on the body a bit more, but I've always had a problem getting expressive and meaningful faces. Any suggestions on books anyone?...
Comments are greatly appreciated and I'd love to have some critiques.
Thinks I like about this one:
The pose itself is nice and dynamic and movement is obvious; High action. The chest and abs are always getting better and this is not too bad.
Things to work on:
The legs and arms are things I still need to work on. I think I need to start drawing individual muscles as shapes unto themselves instead of just trying to fit them into a pre-drawn outline. I'm not convinced that the depth I was trying to create with the foreshortened legs is working. I feel like there is a lack of foreshortening to really give it a greater sense of depth. The head and face are AWFUL...Now granted, I haven't really studied them yet. I have studied them, but I let go of them to work on the body a bit more, but I've always had a problem getting expressive and meaningful faces. Any suggestions on books anyone?...
Comments are greatly appreciated and I'd love to have some critiques.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Miscellaneous
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Size 724 x 1026px
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