Such a simple, yet beautiful and wonderful scene. I love how you can evoke so much emotion with relatively short detail and almost no dialogue. That's just awesome. Keep the wonderful work coming.

Thank you, dear, I'm really glad you liked the story so much I will definitely do my best to keep up this level of work! In fact, I'm doing that right now, to get a few more stories like this out of my head

Oh, excellent! Or as Cee would say, "like so totally rad". Heh. She's so adorable. And yet, her goofiness doesn't seem to mean she's full of cotton candy and dandelion fluff - as this story just displayed. I hope we see more of her romantic/semi-poetic side in the future. Although, seeing Cee and Mara together is always lovely. Either way, can't wait for the next...chapter? Scene? What do you personally refer to each of these as, Zinny? Whatever - can't wait for the next one.

*giggles*

That's what Cee would say, alright! But indeed, as silly and impulsive and bouncy and bubbly as she is, she is not a total airhead; there's actually some good working grey matter in that fuzzy cranium of hers! I'm currently working on at least three different stories with her; one for a collaboration book I'm doing with  rorschfox, one that's just fun and silly, and one that is a naughty flashback from when she was a kitten

Uhm... there's not real chapters, I suppose, just loose scenes from their lives... I haven't really given a lot of thought as to what to call it, hee! But scenes sounds like a good option^^

*hugs*

Thank you, dear, I'm glad you enjoyed it

Ooo, yes indeed, I bet she would look lovely with a moonlit window background! It would certainly make her look very lovely and special, with her also soft and fluffy white fur

oooooo.... what? did I say it aroused me? no no no... that must have been some other Fox... *giggles...

way good hun....

V.

*giggles and gives the totally not aroused vixen a hug*

Hee hee, yes, of course, I'm sure it was that fennec vixen waaay over there that said that, and not you...

*giggles again*

Nevertheless, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story that much, darling! Thanks!

Such a lovely scene you set there, Zinzoline!

It just goes to show that beneath that goofball exterior (of Celeste!), there beats the heart of a true romantic.

Truly, truly wonderful work, Zin!

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that!

*giggles*

And good save, too... to add the reference to Celeste in quickly when speaking of goofballs! But well, it takes a goofball to successfully write a goofball, so... yeh!

Yep, I'm glad I added in that little reference before I hit the "submit" button!!

But I wouldn't have said you were a goofball like Celeste....


.... are you?

Very cute. I have only read some Thursday Prompt responses featuring these characters, but I rather like them.

In August the moon seems more orange and somewhat bigger than usually. It looks like it's going to drop from the sky. In wintertime, moonlight is very white, very cruel... while the sun diminishes into a tiny yellow ball that just visits above the horizon around midday, the silvery-white moon's effect is somehow even more striking. I don't know if it just the fact Finland is so far north that causes these kind of phenomena, but I felt like sharing them after reading this story.

Great little piece. Not as long as some other Mara and Cee stories I remember reading, but very good and very true to the characters nonetheless. Great work. Keep it up.

Thank you, dear. I'm glad you liked the story

That sounds like quite the sight, too! I think you're right, it might be because of Finland being more north that it makes the sun and the moon look so different. I can't remember ever having seen the moon being orange or yellow in tint in the Netherlands, it always seems white or silver-white here, but in winter it does get quite vivid. In fact, on the cold, clear nights when its totally clear and freezing, the moon can be so bright it actually blinds me

Moonlight becomes Mara...

*giggles*

Well, actually it becomes Celeste and cuddles Mara

*gives a soft hug*

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, Major. Thank you

wonderful. *hugs*

*smiles and huggles back*

I'm glad you enjoyed this little story, darling

*giggles*

Yes, yes it is, indeed... it tiptoes in on little kitten feet!