http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1291484/
poetigress The Thursday Prompt (moonlight).
This elementary school class goes on a field trip to the beach and it changes two people's lives forever.
"The way the moonlight shines overhead, the way it's reflecting off the ocean. The way the ocean heaves, the way she runs. She runs in a panic and in determination. She runs deliberately. She runs like a cheetah."
poetigress The Thursday Prompt (moonlight).This elementary school class goes on a field trip to the beach and it changes two people's lives forever.
"The way the moonlight shines overhead, the way it's reflecting off the ocean. The way the ocean heaves, the way she runs. She runs in a panic and in determination. She runs deliberately. She runs like a cheetah."
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.7 kB
The sound of the bus engine, the heat through the glass window, the way the seat's cushioned so it feels like she's actually sitting on something that's alive. The way the other kids are singing songs from class, and Mrs. Louis is talking to one of the other chaparones. There has to be a word for this. She doesn't know what it is.
Hm. I'll take a shot at it...
The noise of the bus brings natural "contentment in safety" while the singing annoys enough to allude to the comforting feeling of the seat as the adults chatter away more than likely needlessly mentioning things not worth scrutiny.
Oh fuck, did I just RAP?!?! But my skin is too lightly caramel, and "having 167 videogames I can type up or even write down the complete title names of" is cool... Also...
"The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion - Game of the Year Edition," dry-humped perfected mention of its name...
Probably "needless italics" too.
Hm. I'll take a shot at it...
[/i]"Complacent Supportive Serenity."[/i]The noise of the bus brings natural "contentment in safety" while the singing annoys enough to allude to the comforting feeling of the seat as the adults chatter away more than likely needlessly mentioning things not worth scrutiny.
Oh fuck, did I just RAP?!?! But my skin is too lightly caramel, and "having 167 videogames I can type up or even write down the complete title names of" is cool... Also...
"The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion - Game of the Year Edition," dry-humped perfected mention of its name...
Probably "needless italics" too.
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EXACTLY! If someones so eager to put out some lengthy and overly implicated dialogue in reference to the artistic work of someone who's style they admire, they better keep their shit straight long enough for it to come out in a format that garners more CONSIDERATION than "raised eyebrows."
I continually make this mistake when I MORE THAN "know better..." XD!!!
I continually make this mistake when I MORE THAN "know better..." XD!!!
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