Category Artwork (Digital) / Macro / Micro
Species Dinosaur
Size 1125 x 1590px
File Size 696.7 kB
I thoroughly enjoyed the story! The character interactions were a lot of fun, and I feel like you did an exceptional job of making the story compliment the sizey stuff, rather than feeling contrived for the sake of making sizey stuff happen. I'm really looking forward to seeing you explore BLK and Alan's characters and their interactions with each other as well as with whomever else you decide to toss their way!
Plot-wise, it might be interesting to see a character dealing with permanent inflation or muscle growth. In a story where that happens, I'd prefer that the character discover drawbacks to their new form after enjoying it for a while. Also, maybe "permanent" is the wrong word. I might like it better if the condition won't wear off by itself, and, having been caused by something fantastic (magic, pseudo-science, etc), only something equally fantastic (if not very specific) would be required to reverse the condition.
As for esthetics, less macro, more muscle, more inflation (air and/or helium). If you need me to be more specific, it's macro for me if all body parts grow equally and their shape and proportions to each other are unchanged. It's inflation or muscle growth for me if individual body parts become more round/curved, the body parts increase in diameter far more than in length, and the head, hands and feet don't increase in length at all.
As for esthetics, less macro, more muscle, more inflation (air and/or helium). If you need me to be more specific, it's macro for me if all body parts grow equally and their shape and proportions to each other are unchanged. It's inflation or muscle growth for me if individual body parts become more round/curved, the body parts increase in diameter far more than in length, and the head, hands and feet don't increase in length at all.
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