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Here's the comparison between the Easter Camillas. I think I've improved a bit.
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They're so stylistically different that it'd be almost entirely subjective on which is "better"
since both pieces are very successful in their own way.
Your 2018 piece has more natural shading that gives great form to the figure while your 2020 piece makes heavy use of line work/weight to define the figure.
The 2018 drawing also has more realistic body proportions with more natural trap muscles and breast proportions. The right piece says "Screw that" and has a more playful approach to anatomy by cutting her ribcage in half, squeezing her head a little, and making the breast noggin sized.
I'd say you've gotten better on the basis that you've not only found a good grasp on rendering 3D forms naturalistically, but are also successfully playing with flattened forms and value to create more cartooned figures.
Keep up da good work.
since both pieces are very successful in their own way.
Your 2018 piece has more natural shading that gives great form to the figure while your 2020 piece makes heavy use of line work/weight to define the figure.
The 2018 drawing also has more realistic body proportions with more natural trap muscles and breast proportions. The right piece says "Screw that" and has a more playful approach to anatomy by cutting her ribcage in half, squeezing her head a little, and making the breast noggin sized.
I'd say you've gotten better on the basis that you've not only found a good grasp on rendering 3D forms naturalistically, but are also successfully playing with flattened forms and value to create more cartooned figures.
Keep up da good work.
Ah, thank you!
I'm sticking by that I like the new one so much more, the old one has such poor gesture and expression that it looks like a doll instead of a person. The proportions and lighting might be more realistic, but it's obvious (at least to me) I didn't know much about actual anatomy and lighting and tone. (Not to mention diapers and hair) I'll definitely be working on getting even better!
I'm sticking by that I like the new one so much more, the old one has such poor gesture and expression that it looks like a doll instead of a person. The proportions and lighting might be more realistic, but it's obvious (at least to me) I didn't know much about actual anatomy and lighting and tone. (Not to mention diapers and hair) I'll definitely be working on getting even better!
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