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Go weegee! Oh yea, if u look on my profile if u hvent yet, it says i like critique so plz. CRITIQUE!!!!!!!!!!!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fanart
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Best Smash in Brawl? It's easily avoidable and even if your hit you can still escape without a problem
Coolest Attacks? It's just a lot of punching
Better Name? I don't even know how you can judge a person by their name
As for the SMBZ Episodes, Alvin-Earthworm works on it in his free time. He does other things besides working on the flash. As for the series it is originally supposed to have 45 episodes, 15 in each saga, 3 sagas in all.
Now for the critique. It has flaws but it's better then most of your work. For 1, Link's Master Sword is way to short and should be much longer. And link also wears a tunic, not a shirt and pants. The Luigi is cool and the fire in hand was a nice touch. If you were a really good Luigi fan, The Thunderhand would of been a better touch. One thing also is Luigi's Mustache is Black not brown, and it's more straight without the bumps on the bottom.
Other than that, the picture is pretty good, the next thing you could work on is shading to improve your drawing.
Coolest Attacks? It's just a lot of punching
Better Name? I don't even know how you can judge a person by their name
As for the SMBZ Episodes, Alvin-Earthworm works on it in his free time. He does other things besides working on the flash. As for the series it is originally supposed to have 45 episodes, 15 in each saga, 3 sagas in all.
Now for the critique. It has flaws but it's better then most of your work. For 1, Link's Master Sword is way to short and should be much longer. And link also wears a tunic, not a shirt and pants. The Luigi is cool and the fire in hand was a nice touch. If you were a really good Luigi fan, The Thunderhand would of been a better touch. One thing also is Luigi's Mustache is Black not brown, and it's more straight without the bumps on the bottom.
Other than that, the picture is pretty good, the next thing you could work on is shading to improve your drawing.
i tried it. theres some shading. i tried on links hand, shadows. and i had intended it to be mario, hence mustache has bumps. luigi has like, just a split in the middle right? and brown cuz i think the RPG series had him with brown. only a few hve it black. and links shirt anint a shirt. its a tunic. and idk how to draw tight clothing, so they look like pants. and thunder hand, idk how to draw. paper or digital
Noooo.... Luigi has always had a black Mustache. Just google image a picture of Luigi and you can get a good image of it. I know you intended to make a tunic, but you made it look like a shirt and pants. Try to make the bottom of the tunic more like a skirt and makes his boots longer then it wouldn't be so bad.
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