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Raven the Birdon - Rough Desgin 1
This is the world debut of a very special young lady. Meet Raven the first born daughter of the LOA version of Rapture and Zonoya and sister of Ral, her twin brother. What can I say about this little lady. She is a red feathered birdon which makes her and her twin brother, Ral very special. Red Birdons, according to the history of the LOA version of the species, are born with powers as well as very keen minds. In other words the other birdons consider red birdons as sacred individuals and will protect them with their lives. This little detail should then tell you something about Raven. She has bodyguard force around her most of the time when she goes out which tends to annoy her sense she hates been protected.
Yes, she has her mother's personality as well as many personality traits of her father who she loves dearly and likes to hang around with. She also likes to hang around with her older brother, Frijir who she pesters alot. Frijir puts up with it but she does tend to get on his nerves. Or at least she use too when she was a baby and cried for her big brother alot. As an adult, Raven is a very free spirited individual with bad girl mentality. Yep, she is definitely Zonoya's little girl. Plus, she can just about get away with anything when it comes to her father. Rapture is like putty in her paws and will do just about anything to make his little 'princess' happy. The same could be said for her brother, Ral. Rapture will do all he can as their father to keep them both safe and secure from anyone who will try to do them harm. Of course, don't think this means that Raven can't fight.... heh heh ohh boy can she fight and trust me when I say you would rather deal with her 5 bodyguards then deal with her royal highness herself. Sure getting pecked to death by her guards kinda sucks but its much better then dealing with her and don't even get me started about Zonoya and Rapture. Dear god, if anyone manages to hurt their pretty powerful baby girl they will have to deal with two very dangerous parents and that is something they DON'T want to deal with.
Zonoya, at this point timeline wise is even more powerful, immortal and physically larger. Rapture is also the same plus the fact that it is nearly impossible to hurt him now. He is not invincible but pretty damn close. Just ask Renara the evil gold dragoness who hates the birdons with a passion. She has tried to kill Rapture so many times that it is beginning to seem rather stupid for her to keep trying. Details on this rivalry between Zonoya, Rapture and Renara will be revealed in an upcoming special set of stories.
Back to Raven, like I said she and her twin brother are special. She loves to read heh heh yep, that is another personality trait she got from her daddy Rapture who also serves as her mentor and teacher when it comes to her using her powers. Red birdons are basically the birdon race's version of purple dragon in that they are very powerful and extremely rare. Like her mother she possesses an alternate form and trust me when I say you won't like her when she goes dark. A red birdon with black feathers is scary thing to behold. Also, like her daddy Rapture, she also possesses an elite dragonbird form. Her body also possesses a set of gems embedded in her flesh. She was born with these gems like this. So she and her twin brother could be considered an evolutionary next step of the birdon race.
More details will be revealed in time...
Yes, she has her mother's personality as well as many personality traits of her father who she loves dearly and likes to hang around with. She also likes to hang around with her older brother, Frijir who she pesters alot. Frijir puts up with it but she does tend to get on his nerves. Or at least she use too when she was a baby and cried for her big brother alot. As an adult, Raven is a very free spirited individual with bad girl mentality. Yep, she is definitely Zonoya's little girl. Plus, she can just about get away with anything when it comes to her father. Rapture is like putty in her paws and will do just about anything to make his little 'princess' happy. The same could be said for her brother, Ral. Rapture will do all he can as their father to keep them both safe and secure from anyone who will try to do them harm. Of course, don't think this means that Raven can't fight.... heh heh ohh boy can she fight and trust me when I say you would rather deal with her 5 bodyguards then deal with her royal highness herself. Sure getting pecked to death by her guards kinda sucks but its much better then dealing with her and don't even get me started about Zonoya and Rapture. Dear god, if anyone manages to hurt their pretty powerful baby girl they will have to deal with two very dangerous parents and that is something they DON'T want to deal with.
Zonoya, at this point timeline wise is even more powerful, immortal and physically larger. Rapture is also the same plus the fact that it is nearly impossible to hurt him now. He is not invincible but pretty damn close. Just ask Renara the evil gold dragoness who hates the birdons with a passion. She has tried to kill Rapture so many times that it is beginning to seem rather stupid for her to keep trying. Details on this rivalry between Zonoya, Rapture and Renara will be revealed in an upcoming special set of stories.
Back to Raven, like I said she and her twin brother are special. She loves to read heh heh yep, that is another personality trait she got from her daddy Rapture who also serves as her mentor and teacher when it comes to her using her powers. Red birdons are basically the birdon race's version of purple dragon in that they are very powerful and extremely rare. Like her mother she possesses an alternate form and trust me when I say you won't like her when she goes dark. A red birdon with black feathers is scary thing to behold. Also, like her daddy Rapture, she also possesses an elite dragonbird form. Her body also possesses a set of gems embedded in her flesh. She was born with these gems like this. So she and her twin brother could be considered an evolutionary next step of the birdon race.
More details will be revealed in time...
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I didn't know about your journal on DA. I don't spend my time reading the journals of other people when I have a business to run and big important projects to finish. But okay I give up I'll just do the original idea I had for the character since it is impossible to get your permission to do a story with your characters even if it will have no impact whatsoever on your current storyline. But may I ask you a few very good questions? Some I think I deserve answers to considering the fact that I like your series and try to find the time in my otherwise very very busy work schedule to make a comment on whenever I can.
1. What is the harm in letting someone who has no intention of stealing your characters just use them in a respectful way in alternate reality story that will not have any affect on the originals?
By the way my stories would be considered fan stories of your series anyway like your comics are by the way a fan series of the official works. I don't see Activision/Blizzard coming onto this site or DA and telling you and others, which I must remind you by the way include ME as well since I am working on a very ambitious original Spyro film trilogy, animated series and various other BIG things I can speak of at the moment that also relate to the Spyro franchise itself, not to use Malefor, Spyro and Cynder or Flame and Ember which are all their property. Not to mention the whole world of the TLoS reality. If they told us all 'Hey you can't use our characters anymore' then all of us would have to stop. None of us have the permission of the OFFICIAL property owners to use any of the Spyro characters and yet that is exactly what we are doing. Some works online could be considered doing the property harm by depicting the Spyro characters in ways that are not in line with the official storyline or their idea of the squeaky image of said characters. Your comic and my Dragon of Destiny series like so many others are all alternate reality stories which use the characters in ways that deviate from the original storyline in various ways. Some stories like my series and others deviate from the original source material drastically while others including your own TLoS: ZR fan comic series not so much.
2. Are you planning to use Zonoya and Rapture in a future original work or something?
I think that is a very valid question that needs to be asked and answered otherwise your characters are just fan characters like so many of my own in Dragon of Destiny, all the DoD series spin offs and the upcoming LOA. I wanted to use your characters in DoD because I thought they were interesting and would fit so well into my series due to their complex personalities and histories. Rapture and Zonoya are very cool characters and I really would have loved to use them but alas I'll just have to use my original ideas which should be no problem. But since I am on the topic: If you don't want anyone to create children for your fan characters that is your choice. I have no problem with that since they are your characters but like I stated above you have created children for the official characters like so many others have without permission by the way and yet when I do the same with your fan characters I get to hear this.
I would have used your characters in a respectful way. This leads me to my final question.
3. So why are you so reluctant to let me or anyone else borrow who would use your characters only in a respectful way when there will be no harm done?
A story already has been done on Deviantart about Rapture and Zonoya... an ADULT type story and you didn't seem to have a problem with it other then saying that DA might not like it since it goes against their policy or something like that. And yet here I am planning to do a very interesting story with Rapture and Zonoya and I get shot down. Wow, talk about a double standard. The story was to be a STANDALONE get it! IT WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN PART OF MY LOA OR DRAGON OF DESTINY OFFICIAL STORYLINE. More of a 'What if...' type story and that is all. But hey don't worry the story I had planned to do with Rapture is/was still in the planning stages. No actual work or writing on it has or had even started yet due to my OWN projects taking up my time or have you been keeping up with my plans lately. I guess not. Some writers would just go ahead and use other people's characters without their permission but I won't. That is how much respect I have for you. I was hoping you would be nice enough to allow a fan of your series to do a RESPECTFUL alternate take on your characters but obviously not.
Perhaps you should ask the so-called writer on Deviantart to take down his/her Rapture and Zonoya sex story since it might give people the wrong ideas that you actually ALLOW fans to use your characters in stories.
1. What is the harm in letting someone who has no intention of stealing your characters just use them in a respectful way in alternate reality story that will not have any affect on the originals?
By the way my stories would be considered fan stories of your series anyway like your comics are by the way a fan series of the official works. I don't see Activision/Blizzard coming onto this site or DA and telling you and others, which I must remind you by the way include ME as well since I am working on a very ambitious original Spyro film trilogy, animated series and various other BIG things I can speak of at the moment that also relate to the Spyro franchise itself, not to use Malefor, Spyro and Cynder or Flame and Ember which are all their property. Not to mention the whole world of the TLoS reality. If they told us all 'Hey you can't use our characters anymore' then all of us would have to stop. None of us have the permission of the OFFICIAL property owners to use any of the Spyro characters and yet that is exactly what we are doing. Some works online could be considered doing the property harm by depicting the Spyro characters in ways that are not in line with the official storyline or their idea of the squeaky image of said characters. Your comic and my Dragon of Destiny series like so many others are all alternate reality stories which use the characters in ways that deviate from the original storyline in various ways. Some stories like my series and others deviate from the original source material drastically while others including your own TLoS: ZR fan comic series not so much.
2. Are you planning to use Zonoya and Rapture in a future original work or something?
I think that is a very valid question that needs to be asked and answered otherwise your characters are just fan characters like so many of my own in Dragon of Destiny, all the DoD series spin offs and the upcoming LOA. I wanted to use your characters in DoD because I thought they were interesting and would fit so well into my series due to their complex personalities and histories. Rapture and Zonoya are very cool characters and I really would have loved to use them but alas I'll just have to use my original ideas which should be no problem. But since I am on the topic: If you don't want anyone to create children for your fan characters that is your choice. I have no problem with that since they are your characters but like I stated above you have created children for the official characters like so many others have without permission by the way and yet when I do the same with your fan characters I get to hear this.
I would have used your characters in a respectful way. This leads me to my final question.
3. So why are you so reluctant to let me or anyone else borrow who would use your characters only in a respectful way when there will be no harm done?
A story already has been done on Deviantart about Rapture and Zonoya... an ADULT type story and you didn't seem to have a problem with it other then saying that DA might not like it since it goes against their policy or something like that. And yet here I am planning to do a very interesting story with Rapture and Zonoya and I get shot down. Wow, talk about a double standard. The story was to be a STANDALONE get it! IT WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN PART OF MY LOA OR DRAGON OF DESTINY OFFICIAL STORYLINE. More of a 'What if...' type story and that is all. But hey don't worry the story I had planned to do with Rapture is/was still in the planning stages. No actual work or writing on it has or had even started yet due to my OWN projects taking up my time or have you been keeping up with my plans lately. I guess not. Some writers would just go ahead and use other people's characters without their permission but I won't. That is how much respect I have for you. I was hoping you would be nice enough to allow a fan of your series to do a RESPECTFUL alternate take on your characters but obviously not.
Perhaps you should ask the so-called writer on Deviantart to take down his/her Rapture and Zonoya sex story since it might give people the wrong ideas that you actually ALLOW fans to use your characters in stories.
actually I have said a few things to others abotu that as well not just you, and they understand as well.
my goodness you writ a lot -_-; half of the time do think people have the time to read all of this? (I'm serious, cut down some of your words a bit please.)
for the record non of this ever happened to me before, when I made chracters and now all of sudden it starts to happen, which is very weird for me, and it gives me an uneasy feeling that i don't really like so much...
my goodness you writ a lot -_-; half of the time do think people have the time to read all of this? (I'm serious, cut down some of your words a bit please.)
for the record non of this ever happened to me before, when I made chracters and now all of sudden it starts to happen, which is very weird for me, and it gives me an uneasy feeling that i don't really like so much...
Sorry about that. I tend to overdo it a tad bit. And I am sorry for being an annoyance by pestering you about your characters. You don't have to worry about that anymore because I have given up. As for the popularity issue... take it slowly and in time you'll get use to it. The key to it is not to let fans pressure you.
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