The poses are details are sublime!

oh..thank you

You're very welcum!

Honestly I think it looks pretty good.

thank you..

Your welcome.

Looks fine to me :|

oh..ok..

Don't worry 'bout how it looks, just make sure you can tell, that you've put a lot of hard work into it~ ^^

wow...that's awesome!

thank you..

np hon

the breast on her right looks a bit angular, but i think the rest of it is very well done. :3 I love the details in the armor/cybernetic parts. it looks great!~

*our right, her left. oops.

yeah...the bottom part kinda does look like it got messed up..

It's not bad though, just a teeny little observation. :3

thank you...kitty has fixed it on the paper already

my pleasure kitty, i hope i helped. :3

TBH you are good..unlike asu...who can't draw worth a crap -.-

oh...

im saying you are a good artist, I how ever...am not a good artist

Your not bad at all Kitty. Her right cybernetic arm needs to be a bit bigger to support the weight of the sword, But I mean, I like it.

was just going by the size of the arm they put in the game...can try to make it bigger though..

That is one thing about cybernetics though: cantileavering, counterbalencing, hydrolics, bungie tendons and just outright power aren't always obvious from the outside.
oh, and pardon the late response...

::Pets Kitty:: This is a very, very good job, especially for someone who hasn't drawn in what did you say? 15 years?

yeah...been that long since drawn anything good...

No matter how long you stop drawin' for, you still have a knack for drawin' awesome things. I encourage you to draw a lot more, Kitty.

I just made a transparent GIF out of the two..... its uncanny how you got the proportions right without tracing.... the only difference is the top right side of the picture (angle of the arm, thickness of arm and shoulders) Still, those are minor details, you did great for not drawing in 15 years!

will see if kitty is able to do anything about the arm..

You DREW THIS?!?!?!

.....What the hell do you commission for?!

because kitty takes forever to draw something...took about two weeks on this one...and have to heavily reference from existing poses...

other artists have different styles...wonderful coloring style...and just better than kitty...

Okay, you do NOT give yourself enough credit.

What really amazes me is how well you did the hard lines of the armor. You could draw SPACE SHIPS or somethin' if you really wanted do. Or robots. Just anything mechanical. You can be a great mech artist.

MECHA-KITTY!!! Don't tell me that doesn't sound cool.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3520819/ posted a spaceship earlier this month..
like tech stuffs..and have others kitty wants to draw...just takes a long time..

its a wonderful work id love to see more works from you kitty maybe even get a art piece from you one day if i hads money :p

kitty will continue to try...just takes a while...even longer than clay figures..

understandable you cant rush great works :p

Think it looks great Dear.

thank you..

It looks pretty good Kitty :3 but there's a few things that I'm noticing

-The breasts, are a little off. Not only is the one angular but I think they're also a little close together.

-I dunno if it's supposed to be that way or not, but the arm holding up the sword is just a little thin...or the hand is a little small...maybe both, but I'm kinda unsure xD

-The only other thing that I'm noticing is the head/ears area. From the way her ears are positioned, it looks like she's supposed to be facing forward, but the face is more of a 3/4 angle. So either one of the ears should be moved back and to the right, or the face needs to shift to the right just a little.

Another thing I want to point out is that incredible detail you have there O.O That looks freaking amazing! Overall I'd call this a success ^^

the breast has been fixed...but will see if able to move them farther apart...kitty still new at this...

the arm is kinda a robot arm...so really is that thin...based off the arm from the computer game she came from..

the ears, kitty is no good at...but will see if kitty can fix them...

thank you very much

You're welcome :3 I hope I was of some help ^^;

yeah...you helped kitty a lot

glad I could be of use then ^^

Looks pretty good, there.

thank you..

You atention to detail is awesome. I think you're a perfectionest like me. give yourself a chance its good. I like it .

thank you..

If you're looking for a more specific tip or hint I'll be pleased to help miss Kitty.

15 years without drawing! You must be kidding!, the drawing is excellent, just have to polish some details such as breasts and a little waist is otherwise perfect!

the breast has been fixed on the paper already...the waist is just how she was in the game...plus she is crouching a little, and the other side of her waist is hidden by her shield..

Oh, cool!! you are skillfull!!

well, Kitty... i m afraid that i can t give you the type of criticism you asked for, for i am pretty much free of artistic talent whatsoever. So all i can say, even though it won t help you a lot is: I really really like this. If you wouldn t have told that you haven t drawn in 15 years i d never have thought so. This is incredible.

thank you

I'm no artist so i can1t give any good tips. One thing's for sure: You beat my humanoid drawing skill!

oh..

It is greatly done.

thank you..

Thats good drawing.

thank you..

Looks cool Kitty =3

thank you..

The general design of the character is very cool and well detailed, however, the proportions of the arms are a bit off making her seem unbalanced. Further more, her pose seems a bit stiff. Aside from those critiques, I'd say your style is coming along rather nicley, so keep it up and practice drawing different human and animal poses from time to time. ^^

the size of the arms and the pose come from the game...always thought the arms looked a bit thin in the game, but is cybernetic arms...will see what kitty can do...

wasn't able to fix the face any...but thank you

the only thing left unsaid is

it needs more cowbell

huh?