FA+
Shop
197
Views
Views
2
Favorites
Favorites
Category
Poetry / Miscellaneous
Species Gryphon
Size 120 x 120
File Size 35.5 kB
Report this content
More from TooieAndKoie
Tooie: Koie doesn't even know this thing exists yet. He'll probably hear about it soon though. Anyways, This was an idea I have been tossing around for about a year now. I originally was going to make it a story, but the scenario ended up being incorporated into a D&D game I have been playing with my friends. Sometimes when I do that, it causes me to loose interest in the original idea.
The poem periodically changes from present to past tense and back again. I don't know why I did it, but it just reads right to me. I did make an effort to split the changes up between special sections. So the changes are intentional.
One last things, this story is SLIGHTLY related to my recent story Town. You do not need to read Town to enjoy the poem, but some things might be a little confusing. Hell even if you read Town a lot of it might be confusing. Still, I hope you like it. Please comment. I will answer any questions you have, even if they are about things you don't understand. Enjoy! :)
-4-3-10-
Tooie: I added a stanza in the second section where he vomits. It sounds better then what I had.
The poem periodically changes from present to past tense and back again. I don't know why I did it, but it just reads right to me. I did make an effort to split the changes up between special sections. So the changes are intentional.
One last things, this story is SLIGHTLY related to my recent story Town. You do not need to read Town to enjoy the poem, but some things might be a little confusing. Hell even if you read Town a lot of it might be confusing. Still, I hope you like it. Please comment. I will answer any questions you have, even if they are about things you don't understand. Enjoy! :)
-4-3-10-
Tooie: I added a stanza in the second section where he vomits. It sounds better then what I had.
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
Species Gryphon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 35.5 kB
Now let me first say normally..poetry is very iffy on me. Probably because most of the time I confess I always wonder if I'm even understanding it x.x That being said I did enjoy this poem quite a bit. I definitely got the hints of your story Town as well as a few other stories, or rather elements that reached out to them. ^_^ An excellently done piece Tooie, one that I easily made mental images from. Congrats!
Comments