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ok well here it is i hope it gets good feedback
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 900 x 234px
File Size 48.6 kB
DOH! Crummy dance date incoming!
I really like the character you've got here--she's got some nice comic-y style. One bit of critique, though--in your last frame, the order of the dialogue is a bit confusing. Even though her response is a bit lower than her mother's, it is still furthest to the left, which leads the eye to read it first. Perhaps if you placed her response in the lower right corner, it would be less confusing.
I really like the character you've got here--she's got some nice comic-y style. One bit of critique, though--in your last frame, the order of the dialogue is a bit confusing. Even though her response is a bit lower than her mother's, it is still furthest to the left, which leads the eye to read it first. Perhaps if you placed her response in the lower right corner, it would be less confusing.
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