awwww... soo cuute! ok, not helpful I know, but this story is gush worthy, lol. Ass-holes get served, the innocent get rescued, and the reader comes to care about the characters quickly. If there were spelling or grammar mistakes, I didn't notice, it flows very well.

yep, I'm glad I inspired you, but honestly? I read up to the point of 'evo dust' and just stopped reading, sorry. I really don't like deviating from cannon that far ;-; just ruins it for me.

well, it was the only legitimate way for me to do it. I figured, Moon Stones cause Pokemon to evolve, mayhaps something else from space could have a unique effect like it? Besides, 'Evo-Dust- was an on-the-spot name, I was going to call it 'Moon Sand', but that'd be too transparent, hm?

yeah, I've just never been into pokemorphs. I actually loathe them. Surrre, there's anthro pokemon, but all of the others weren't ment to be humanoid :( I prefer them feral.

Yeah... Personally I'd agree readily, feral pokemon you could imagine having as a companion or pet, but humanoid would never be that role. The 'A Pokemon Story' line're being written for those who DO like pokemorphs. Why do you think that I've more feral pokemon stories than anthro? Vaporeon's New Life, Love's Twisted Trunk and even the Rose stories are more my thing, which is why they're longer and there are more of them. Sorry to chat your ear off, love your writings and I can't wait for more from you on AGNPH. :3

Heyyy, I'm not just on AGNPH ^^: I'm on SF too! And I'm gonna start posting all my stuff to here, I suppose. Might start that this afternoon, actually. I'll have a read of your other stories, though. I love Vaporeon's, personally! ^^

I did notice that you have some 'flow' issues. Really...it's like polish. Kinda hard to explain, sorry. But once you work on your flow, your stories will really improve! ^^