thats a good foray into the digital world dude, if you ever need in help with some of the stuff feel free to ask!

Thanks, I guess I shouldn't be too harsh on myself since I am still learning a completely different medium than the one I'm used to, right now I'm only using digital as a crutch to add color to my work in a cleaner, faster, cost effective fashion.

At least I have solid linework, I'll give myself that.

Yeah when it comes to the linework in this picture id say i like your line placement, but the variation of line weight could use a little work.

Ah yes line weight, what does that mean?

Using thin lines, and thick lines to create more contrast, like using thin lines on the hair interiors to add waves but not making thick so they dont draw attention away from the eye. I like using thinner lines on female faces, for things like cheekbones or additional face details, because the thicker the lines are the more attention is drawn to them. Im sure someone on youtube could explain the concept better than me lol.