This one is probably my favourite so far. The first panel may be a little out of whack in relation to the rest, and the third panel may be a little full while the second isn't doing much, storywise...but look at that panel two. That panel two is brilliant. That's the single best shot yet. I updated my program with some poses earlier today, and here's the first one being showcased. It took me a long time to sort through what I wanted to use, as there are 168 of them and they're not labeled, but when I stumbled across that one, I knew.

I also abandoned the speech bubble idea. I just prefer this. Maybe one day I'll go back and change them in the other strip, but probably not. I won't learn if I just erase the mistakes.

We finally get a little insight into Kazriya, and now we know that she's amnesiac. I didn't get the chance to show Erika's backstory at all, or her current disability, but that's for another strip.

At this rate it'll take me a hundred strips just to finish a chapter! Auughhhrhhrrr...