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Awesome. :3

Thanks, glad you think so. :)

Faved for my bro being awesome <3

*snickers* He is pretty awesome. :P

Hey FW, you should add me to the fray at some point. Imagine, you, Jizzal and me doing an epic battle? 0o0 I think that's the next step. Get back to me

wheeee is by far the best keyword ever.
good job =P

I think WAAAAAAAAAAA is a much better one myself. X3

maybe, but i don't see that one up there =P

Even so, your style and technique really show in this comic. Keep up the great work wolfie.

Well thanks! I'll keep trying my best! :)

Shouldn't of got too angry had a tendency to bring down accuracy as frustration rises and ye start becoming more reckless, unless you know how to berserk.

Haha, that's very true. X3 And I somehow doubt that Forest knows beserk, so he's just hurting himself here getting upset.

Aye, anger and violence for a warrior is always an answer... only if you know how to control it, how to use it to motivate yourself to get what you desire, however sadly it appears for most they let their emotions control them... and thus x3 well you see.

Move backwards so he doesn't collapse your lungs!

*laughs* I was thinking that too! But it looks like he got caught flat-footed this time. X3

AH THE OPENINGS AND POSSIBILITYS OF FIGHTING WITH TONFA LIKE WEAPONS <3

fucking caps DX

I know! The only problem is that they're hard to illustrate while fighting...Though that's probably from me needing more experience overall with doing fight scenes. XP

Again, these comics really make me respect you as an artist. Even if it's not what you had in your head, it's still really good. :D

Well thanks Humbug! I try my best. X3 Its good to know that I'm still improving at least.

It's delightful to read. The level of talent you've attained really is astounding, I don't think that can be said enough.

That said, in an effort to offer constructive criticism, I'm not totally sure about the bottom-left panel. The first few times I looked this over, it was certainly dynamic and active, but I wasn't able to really pick out what was happening (the slide). Once I read your explanation I could totally see it, and it made the transition to the last panel's kick clear and awesome, but it wasn't until reading your explanation that I 'got it'; what's in the panel conveys the high-angle perspective and the position of one of his legs, but without seeing his other leg, some indication of his near proximity to the ground, or some indication of the direction of movement of his body, I don't know if the panel communicates that on its own.

...Having said that, I still have to reiterate that your recent work is just amazing.

I appreciate the critique, and I did think that at one point. Sure, -I- know exactly what's going on (cause its all in my head), but is it really that obvious to everyone else? That's a big problem with doing any picture I think, what to show and what not to show, and having one panel flow more smoothly into the next. It really is the thing that slows me down most...

On this one, I could have shrunken the middle panel and made another, smaller one on the side that would more clearly show that Zal was sliding under Forest's next attack, so that the next panel would be more clear. I think that would have lessened the impact of the middle panel though...I also could have "zoomed" out on that panel too, showing more of his leg rising up off the ground, and showing that he's actually sliding under the attack. But that would have possibly made it less dynamic too. XP

See what I mean? Its always a bit of a give and take with comics. There's not enough room to show absolutely everything I'd like to on each page, so I've got to do an abridged version of what I'm picturing.

Now, if I was doing an animation... :P

Thanks again, and I'm glad any improvements I've made have shown through my work. X3

Yeah, I know what you mean. I was never under the impression that it was a 'simple' thing to 'fix'! Still, thanks for taking the time to read and consider, even if you knew all that already. :)

What's going on!
I want to know! *bounces*
Why is FW all forgetful of things! His heart has been stooolen! Nooooo
Poor FW