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Just to get a sample size, I decided to reupload the first chapter of KURO in past-tense. For this version, I had to rewrite portions of the chapter to better fit the format.
Please see the original upload: KURO - Chapter 1 (First-Person, Present-Tense)
"KURO: A Dragon Lord's Son" is a story about a human who is reincarnated as the son of an evil Dragon Lord who wants nothing more than to sire a son to become his right-hand in his world conquest and eventual successor. Named Kuroginryuu, or "Kuro", he is trained relentlessly to become the evil dragon his new father desires. However, he is not a bad person and would much rather become a hero instead, or at the very least a carefree dragon if that is out of the question. Torn between his desires and instincts, what will his fate be? Will he fight back against his father or join him?
This is chapter 1 of this story. If you would like to see future chapters, let me know in the comments. Let me know which version you'd prefer.
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Please see the original upload: KURO - Chapter 1 (First-Person, Present-Tense)
"KURO: A Dragon Lord's Son" is a story about a human who is reincarnated as the son of an evil Dragon Lord who wants nothing more than to sire a son to become his right-hand in his world conquest and eventual successor. Named Kuroginryuu, or "Kuro", he is trained relentlessly to become the evil dragon his new father desires. However, he is not a bad person and would much rather become a hero instead, or at the very least a carefree dragon if that is out of the question. Torn between his desires and instincts, what will his fate be? Will he fight back against his father or join him?
This is chapter 1 of this story. If you would like to see future chapters, let me know in the comments. Let me know which version you'd prefer.
FIRST | NEXT>>
Category Story / Transformation
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 120 x 98px
File Size 18.2 kB
I must admit that I feel this version is more easier to read than the last one, however I also must admit that I enjoyed both, I think that you must keep the one that you feel more confortable for writting.
Now, the plot it looks very good, The premise is very interesting and the characters look well developed, at least for me this is an story that deserves to be continued, so I hope that you can keep doing it ^^
Now, the plot it looks very good, The premise is very interesting and the characters look well developed, at least for me this is an story that deserves to be continued, so I hope that you can keep doing it ^^
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