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The Clockwork Vice-Sinful Pride page 1
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 887 x 1280px
File Size 604.8 kB
Good looking comic.
My only critique is that top block of text. It is too squished and there is so much of it that my mind automatically tells me to skip reading it.
You could use the rest of the page and use several easier to read block to deliver the same message. It would be easier on the reader and more aesthetically pleasing.
My only critique is that top block of text. It is too squished and there is so much of it that my mind automatically tells me to skip reading it.
You could use the rest of the page and use several easier to read block to deliver the same message. It would be easier on the reader and more aesthetically pleasing.
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