Oh wow, you weren't kidding about things turning sour..

Not to say the story was bad or anything, of course, but after that vivid scene of Zoroark shutting down from anxiety, only to snap into a violent outburst... Don't get me wrong, the fact that you're making me feel this way in a fetish story is a testament to your skill as a writer, but i certainly don't feel like ogling the poor fox anymore.

I just want to give her a hug.. and maybe also teach her sign language...

Well, that's just damn depressing and ruins the enjoyment I had from the fetish content. Think I'll pass on these from now on.

fair enough, honestly

I really loved this sequel! It's serious, but I don't agree it's more serious than the first entry. There was a lot of suspense in the first part, along with Zoroark's famished body contrasting the illustrious Alolan Tourist life. I enjoy the way you wrote suspense in both parts, I knew that credit card was going to max out at some point, and when it did, everything falling apart was a great read. You fit a lot into a short story, without delaying the weight gain too long. And who knows whether the Zoroark will find happiness? Will she get a kind master and control her urges? Or will she fall into a vat of Malasadas and explode? I think it's fine being dark and serious if it's well written like your work. I think the series is a good example of the "hungry thief" archetype.

The story great, but I feel bad for Zoroark, she's so lonely and depressed. I hope she finds her own happiness

Another great zoroark story!