Yeah, it didn't have the same grasp or tact as the last two. Twasn't eerie or have the mysterious twilight feel. Plus the bonuses of FA appearances made it very intriguing.

i may just stop the series all together. Its sucks because my OCD kept me to the same rhyme scheme that i've been doing.... oh well, this one's goin to scraps

Oh pray tell don't be throwing when the goods a showing.
A lot of people enjoy these. When you find a rhyme scheme form that works write it down so you don't lose it.
This is when the trying in the trenches doesn't work that one works harder and finds away around the problems to develop highest as an individual an a writer.
Or maybe I should just shut up, ye probally hear enough lectures in ye schooling from some random man who digs up dead bodies and labels broken pots for a living the writers about them and complains about others who write about the same thing. *Its more complicated then it seems* Still, *sigh*, that is up to you.

I don't know Silent Hill that well but suprisingly these three poems despite the fact you're not so fond of the ending of the 3rd help to better my understanding. *hugs*