Still looks good.

maybe a little, but it's a marvelous start! looks like the neck might be a little too long/head a little too small, but don't quote me, heh

The neck is something I'm always mucking up. 90% of the time I make them too short and it just messes everything else up. xD I'm sure I'll figure it out, once I've had a break from it. :P

*SNAPS*

the shoulders are too high! If you check the line of her torso, it looks like her shoulders are too high up, even if she was shrugging. Not trying to bash or anything, but I think that's what might be off about this pic. The details on her face are fantastic!

like, it's a combo of the two. if you dropped her arms, the neck would definitely be too long, so a little tweak on both accounts should fix whatever wonkiness might appear. I wish I could draw; I've seen people redline stuff like this, but all I can do is describe it in text, lol X3

I think it has something to do with the boobs, too, they may be a touch too low. See, any small change affects everything else, which is why drawing becomes a pain in the ass sometimes. xD

*chuckles* I bet! I get what you mean about not having everything perfect for the prelim sketch, though. Doesn't make any sense to work so hard on it when the commissioner might change the pose entirely, lol XD

*Envies*

Ru, this looks quite lovely! I really love her curvy little body.

The only things I can say to "fix" are to add the small hoop in her right ear and perhaps make her right arm a little less "fat." I'm not sure if I'm noticing this because I have twig arms IRL or because it would look better for the drawing, though. XD

If I really look at it, I can see what Papi means about the neck being too long/boobs too low or whatever, but I still think it looks really great! The left arm looks long to me, but I can see that the hand it hanging where it's supposed to, so it must be connected with the neck thing. In any case, Ru, I really like it, a LOT, and I can't wait to see how you color it!

Thanks so much ^^

Yeah, I noticed pretty much all of that already, but it wasn't terribly essential to specific character details, so I decided I'd wait untl after approval before going into major fixing detail. Wouldn't want to spend forever fixing things only to find out you didn't like the basic pose and I had to start all over, y'know?

No worries, I'll fix everything. To the best of my ability anyway x3 I'll get back to you once I've done that.

Yeah, that makes sense. Sorry, I guess I wasn't really sure how much you wanted me to say about a rough sketch =) can't wait!

Not a problem, never hurts to know exactly what to do, anyway x3

Yay a kitty. :3

Mruuur , she is pretty :3