Gaia is always fun, man I havnet been back there in awhile XD
Good job on using your style but keeping it with the GAIA esc feel~

ATTEMPT AT CRITIQUE #1: The linework is a little shaky on this. I think you use photoshop if I remember correctly....which is probably why since I have the same problem with that in PS. X.x I end up redrawing lines a lot. Sometimes setting up the brush to "dual brush" helps in the brush settings in the upper right. I have found the new inking tool in ArtRage pro is awesome as well! I haven't gotten to use that yet on a full picture though. XD A lot of people say OC (but it's not for MacOS so we need to go on the windows end through bootcamp to use it) is really good for this too if you want to improve it.

Uhmmm.. The perspective looks a bit weird but it's very hard to draw things from this angle! Sometimes you can push foreshortening more with the shading by making it darker towards the ground and more light hitting on top. Like this! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2674343/

Oh I also find using posemaniacs is an awesome reference for anatomy for things like this. http://www.posemaniacs.com/
Find a model in a similar pose and you can rotate it around until it's how you want it. Then look at is while you draw the base structure for your picture. \o/

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