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*slides down's voln's chimeny and lays this under his tree then raids his fridge too taking his foodz and shuffling off after tripping over nothing and being knocked out for a while*
Gift art for VOLN!!!
Gift art for VOLN!!!
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I hope you don't mind a little bit of constructive criticism, from one writer to another. I dig your color scheme and I REALLY like that V. Your O is cool too. But if you compare those to your L and N the style is kinda different. Like instead of like ending fat they kind of taper off, ya know?
I sound like I am hating on you, and I don't wanna tell you how to run your game, but what is really killing me is that L. Like it doesn't look like an L, ya know? It sorta looks like a U. And maybe with the N you should remove that extension that goes into the inside of it.
You know how they are always harping about keeping it simple? If you made those two a little simpler this piece would be fucking burning. Heh, and with one color dude. Rock on.
I know people are REALLY touchy in the graff community and if I offended ya I am sorry.
I sound like I am hating on you, and I don't wanna tell you how to run your game, but what is really killing me is that L. Like it doesn't look like an L, ya know? It sorta looks like a U. And maybe with the N you should remove that extension that goes into the inside of it.
You know how they are always harping about keeping it simple? If you made those two a little simpler this piece would be fucking burning. Heh, and with one color dude. Rock on.
I know people are REALLY touchy in the graff community and if I offended ya I am sorry.
no no not at all i've ALWAYS not only accepted constructive critisicm but i've wanted it and sometimes begged for it ^.^
i see now what you mean about the "L" and i was afraid of it looking too plain but i wanted it to go in a certain direction without making it too complex and drawing the eye of the watcher solely to it because of the one color scheme i like to keep the eye balanced so it doesn't confuse the watcher with the fill
now as for the "N" in the sketch i was looking at it and without that insert it really looked bereft and just like one big open hole and the whole space issue with this piece was to leave as little space as possible with my bottom that barely makes sense as my evidence i agree looking at it again i should've done better with the "N" or picked a different insert altogether
once again THANK YOU SO MUCH fer teh criticism it really is appreciated ^.^
i see now what you mean about the "L" and i was afraid of it looking too plain but i wanted it to go in a certain direction without making it too complex and drawing the eye of the watcher solely to it because of the one color scheme i like to keep the eye balanced so it doesn't confuse the watcher with the fill
now as for the "N" in the sketch i was looking at it and without that insert it really looked bereft and just like one big open hole and the whole space issue with this piece was to leave as little space as possible with my bottom that barely makes sense as my evidence i agree looking at it again i should've done better with the "N" or picked a different insert altogether
once again THANK YOU SO MUCH fer teh criticism it really is appreciated ^.^
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