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The bulge on her belly wouldn't last all that long as her growth had picked up once more, a bit disheartened as she saw it shrink away to its normal size. The moon was still intact, but she couldn't really enjoy the feeling of being full now that she had grown enough to not make it distend her belly. Still, she wasn't going to complain about being even larger, smiling as she glanced around her spot, her gaze locking onto the blue and green orb that was now starting to orbit her. She couldn't help but smile, finding it silly that she was getting so huge that she'd have entire worlds orbiting her now instead of simply residing on one just hours ago.
Not wanting to risk seeing the orb...marble...crash into her on its own accord, she would take the initiative and reach out to it, having her hand go with its trajectory for a bit but ultimately managed to grasp hold of it after getting its orbit to halt. She would show care in her actions, given she held her home and all, pulling it towards her before having it press against her chest in an attempt to at least show her appreciation for the world.
Her peace was a welcome thing, but it wouldn't last forever as she shuddered when something slammed into her. No object was felt when she glanced over to see what hit her at an angle from her back, but another shudder would rock her form when she felt a form of energy, a very welcome form of it, going through her body, much like the one from that plane she grabbed hold of earlier. Those on the world would realize that she had taken the full brunt of a solar wave that was heading for the planet, but those who could see her face would see a wide smile forming on it, feeling that she was only going to grow larger and even faster from here.
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Voting results of Round Twelve.
Rest: 39 votes.
Play: 22 votes.
Snack: 10 votes.
Other: 3 votes.
Total: 74 votes.
Potency value results.
Rest: 39 x 10 = +390% growth.
Play: 22 x 10 = +220% growth.
Snack: 10 x 10 = +100% growth.
Other: 3 x 10 = +30% growth.
Ease of calculations(no effect on growth): +100%.
Total: +840% current size increase.
New size: 15,592.63 mi./25,093.91 km. >> 130,978.09 mi./210,788.8 km. Numbers were rounded to the nearest hundredth.
A type of energy is flowing through the salazzle due to the odd effects from a sun burst. Growth rates have doubled from here on!
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Really didn't plan on the bonus being applied to this part, having initially planned for when the moon wasn't gobbled down. >.>
Now larger than even Jupiter in size, the salazzle is the second largest thing in our solar system. And with the third and final bonus acquired, we'll see on how quickly she'll grow now.
Final stretch as well, as there's only three more parts left!
Round thirteen poll is closed. Thank you for voting!
Salazzle © Nintendo, GAMEFREAK, Creatures Inc..
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The bulge on her belly wouldn't last all that long as her growth had picked up once more, a bit disheartened as she saw it shrink away to its normal size. The moon was still intact, but she couldn't really enjoy the feeling of being full now that she had grown enough to not make it distend her belly. Still, she wasn't going to complain about being even larger, smiling as she glanced around her spot, her gaze locking onto the blue and green orb that was now starting to orbit her. She couldn't help but smile, finding it silly that she was getting so huge that she'd have entire worlds orbiting her now instead of simply residing on one just hours ago.
Not wanting to risk seeing the orb...marble...crash into her on its own accord, she would take the initiative and reach out to it, having her hand go with its trajectory for a bit but ultimately managed to grasp hold of it after getting its orbit to halt. She would show care in her actions, given she held her home and all, pulling it towards her before having it press against her chest in an attempt to at least show her appreciation for the world.
Her peace was a welcome thing, but it wouldn't last forever as she shuddered when something slammed into her. No object was felt when she glanced over to see what hit her at an angle from her back, but another shudder would rock her form when she felt a form of energy, a very welcome form of it, going through her body, much like the one from that plane she grabbed hold of earlier. Those on the world would realize that she had taken the full brunt of a solar wave that was heading for the planet, but those who could see her face would see a wide smile forming on it, feeling that she was only going to grow larger and even faster from here.
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Voting results of Round Twelve.
Rest: 39 votes.
Play: 22 votes.
Snack: 10 votes.
Other: 3 votes.
Total: 74 votes.
Potency value results.
Rest: 39 x 10 = +390% growth.
Play: 22 x 10 = +220% growth.
Snack: 10 x 10 = +100% growth.
Other: 3 x 10 = +30% growth.
Ease of calculations(no effect on growth): +100%.
Total: +840% current size increase.
New size: 15,592.63 mi./25,093.91 km. >> 130,978.09 mi./210,788.8 km. Numbers were rounded to the nearest hundredth.
A type of energy is flowing through the salazzle due to the odd effects from a sun burst. Growth rates have doubled from here on!
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Now larger than even Jupiter in size, the salazzle is the second largest thing in our solar system. And with the third and final bonus acquired, we'll see on how quickly she'll grow now.
Final stretch as well, as there's only three more parts left!
Round thirteen poll is closed. Thank you for voting!
Salazzle © Nintendo, GAMEFREAK, Creatures Inc..
Category All / Macro / Micro
Species Pokemon
Size 1920 x 1080px
File Size 799.9 kB
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