Nice work! :D You've come a long ways in terms of defining shape & form, as well as your shading.
I also like some of the subtle background details, like how the shoes are changing into Tempest's hoof adornments :)

There are only two critiques I can make:

1) When full-viewed, the sharp texturing of the fur where it changes over from skin stands out quite harshly. Same thing with the hair. I recommend not putting so much detail into individual strands: the extremely high contrast sticks out like a sore thumb against everything else.

2) Inconsistent shading. If the environment lighting is strong enough to generate a noticeable cast-shadow (looking at the floor), then the self-cast shadows on the character should also be visible. As it stands, you have ambient shading on most of the character, but not all of it. For example, you've got cast shadow from the head & snout onto the neck, but not from the torso onto the left (our right) arm. Similarly, part of the left (our right) leg should be in shadow, since the front half of that leg should be catching almost all the light. This clash between what the environment communicates for lighting, and what most of the character communicates for lighting, disrupts the narrative you're trying to portray.

Thanks for the critique.
I will have to pay more attention to the lighting and shading next time

Oh, and also the lack of shadow on the can & black T-Shirt in the background :P

Very fitting for her, I'm sure an anthro Tempest would be a world class kick boxer, good enough to rival earth pony masters.
(Because, of course, earth ponies are naturally sturdier and stronger, she's just THAT good.)

For sure, she would kick ass

Ah, more Tempest art is always good. This is pretty sweet, hope you make more someday.

I suspect I probably will someday