I haven't read enough to have an opinion yet but both main character are pretty good

Thank you~~! *hugs* hey you're No.1 today~~! Congratulations~~!!

So... what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

nice the triangle of love heheh

Thank you,Mr Puma~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

the perfect love triangle ♥

Thank you,~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

Snuggles for sure!! ♥♥

me too////

Haru: Hello!
Legoshi: Haru?
Haru: I brought flowers for you two. Just like you ask Legoshi
Louis: Hmm?
Legoshi: U-um. ////////
Louis kisses Legoshi

I love how you transform the whole scene into a cute and humorous scene!

Thanks for writing, Tanner~~! *hugs*
Let me post it~~!

what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

I accept. Never let flowers go to waist

I like your way.////

AWWWWW cute

Thank you,Bjbo~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

Magic tiger: i would say thanks

me too./////

Nice job

Thank you!

huh, seems you broke your own rule XD

still amazing work

Just try something new.XD

Thank you,Blitz~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

considering i have a wife XD
she be bringing them for us

oh yeah, I miss her.
I also like your current pairing.////

well if you were to change up the rules for females you would see more of natalie
but i also have my hubby sven as well in Fuken no bitoku

I like Fuken no bitoku.

awesome everyone always ships these two

Legoshi

louis is my 2nd favorite character

Nice senpai

Legoshi san, he is so cute, tall and his heart is so big also I think his fur is so soft hehehe

can I sleep together with you?

Great work! And Legoshi is my favorite character, too! With Louis as my second fave!

Its very rare to see you draw a female. Nice work!

Thank you,Royce~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

I would ask what sort of flower that is.

This is really good! Haru looks cute, Louis still a badass and Legosi best husband.

Thank you! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

Simply show my gratitude and find some to repay her.

This is Cute!

Thank you,Harry~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

I would thank them!

Legoshi is the best shipping material in the entire series

Shipping with Louis, Haru, Bill and Jack too

Thank you,Roland~~! *hugs* what would you do if a girl who brought flower to bless you and your husbando?/////

can I want this Flowers?

Thank you!

make it up and accept apologize.

I hope them don't fight together again.

Nice

And a cute couple

Haru : Ah! Legosi! Good thing you're here.
Legosi : H-Haru?! /////
Haru : Can you help me carry one of these bags?
Legosi : Uh ummm /////
Louis : Hm? Are you gonna help her?
Haru : Legosi! Don't just stand there.
Legosi : O-okay! See you later, Louis!
Louis : Ok.

Legosi and Haru then walks in quite a complete silence.
Legosi : (Should I start talking now?)/////
Haru : (Why didn't I just ask Louis? I should've known this would happen.)/////
Legosi & Haru : Umm... Wanna...
Legosi : Ah, sorry! You can go first. /////
Haru : Ah, it's nothing. /////
Legosi : (Aaagh! The situation turned awkward. What should I do?) So... Wanna hang out somewhere after this? /////
Haru : ///// Umm... Yeah! I think I can.

The conversation continued slowly but surely. Meanwhile, Exatra spied on them from a window of the cafe they just passed through.
Exatra : So, he's not with Louis then? *Sigh* There goes my fantasy.

Although many people like Louis X Legoshi, I also feel cute with Haru's relationship. //////

Sweet! You fully present the atmosphere of the original story!
Thanks for writing, Mr.X~~! *hugs*
Let me post it~~!

Not bad 👌
What do you think about a pic with Lugoshi and Juno? 🤔

*Continuation of Legoshi & Bill*
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33746899/

Later that evening after the species traitment

Legosi: “Senpai”
Louis: “You’re late”
Legosi: “Sorry i was moon bathing, when I saw the watch I run here”
Louis: “I heard Bill was happy about his new role”
Legosi: “He told me and remember me”
Louis: “Do you feel something for him?”
Legosi: “//// Why this question?”
Louis: “You are both carnivores and both are form a very curious species”
Legosi: “Well, I can’t say anything about this”
Louis: “How about Haru?”
Legosi: “//////////////”

Legosi touched his chest

Louis: “I see”
Legosi: “W-wait Louis-Senpai”

But suddenly

Haru: “Hey? (Why they two are together?) I got flowers for the exhibition”
Louis: “Coll”
Legosi: “H-Haru-chan”
Haru: “What’s wrong Legosi-kun?”
Louis: “Yeah what’s wrong Legosi?”
Legosi: “N-nothing ////////////”
Haru: “Would you two come with me in the cafeteria?”
Legosi: “Ehm”

Legosi watched Louis

Louis: “Why you watch me if you want to go, just go”
Legosi: “I-I…”

Legosi noticed a little tear on Louis’s face

Haru: “So Legosi-kun, will you come with me?”
Louis: “…”
Legosi: “N-no, maybe another time”
Haru: “Umphf you two are so boring”

So Haru went away

Legosi: “…”
Louis: “I told you, you could go”
Legosi: “I preferred to give priority to my favorite herbivore”
Louis: “I’m your favorite herbivore?”
Legosi: “Sure”
Louis: “…”
Legosi: “Oh, it’s kinda sounds strange, I’m sorry, I’m sorry”
Louis: “I hate that part of you”
Legosi: “Huh?”
Louis: “Why you feel sorry?”
Legosi: “Well I…”

Suddenly Louis grabbed Legosi

Louis: “I know what bill searched you for”
Legosi: “Uhm?”
Louis: “I mean the real reason”
Legosi: “What are you saying?”

Louis pulled Legosi to follow him to his dormitory room

Louis: “Follow me”
Legosi: “This is your room”
Louis: “Yeah”
Legosi: “You’re are alone”
Louis: “This is the priviledge of having a father, well let it”
Legosi: “Why am I here at this hour of night, I may be in danger if”
Louis: “Shhh, be quiet”
Legosi: “Senpai…”
Louis: “I’ll be clear Legosi”
Legosi: “Um?”
Louis: “You’re mine!”
Legosi: “/////////// What do you mean?”
Louis: “With Haru my relationship isn’tsafe, she already feel somethign for you, and maybe for others too”
Legosi: “…”
Louis: “I search someone who is faithful”
Legosi: “I-I see”
Louis: “And I think that someone is you”
Legosi: “M-Me ////////////?”
Louis: “Come here I’ll teach you something new, and if Bill has something to say anymore”
Legosi: “W-wait”
Louis: “You can tell him you are no more virgin”

Louis took Legosi by his suspenders

Legosi: “Senpai, you’re misunderstanding”
Louis: “I promise you will like”
Legosi: “Euh ///////////”
Louis: “Just keep quiet or people will find out you’re here”
Legosi: “W-wait s-stop don’t pull down my p-pants… Senpaiii //////////////”

Suddenly Legosi awoke in his room

Legosi: “Again… I keep doing wet dreams with Senpai”
Jack: “Uh? Legosi you said something?”
Legosi: “N-nothing really… ///////////// Damn…”

Legosi so stood up and faced another day of school

Haru: "Hey? (Why they two are together?) I got flowers for the exhibition"

↑

This reminds me of the story that was still very early
I miss it a little bit
But I prefer their later development (I mean Legosi & Louis)

Yeah me too, the station speech scene was so touching, it only missed a hug, but their smile were so shining

Louis: “Why you watch me if you want to go, just go”
Legosi: "I-I ..."

Legosi noticed a little tear on Louis ’s face

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@口@
WOW, I have to say that Louis is very talented in deduction
Not only on stage, but also in reality!

Hehe Louis is simply too cool

oh, so this was a wet dream?
It ’s so real, it ’s very close to the original
how did you get this idea?
Awesome! I was taken away by the plot almost like legosi in your story.//////

Well I would create a gay novel with them...
If only they are gay...

This love triangle picture gives me Vampire Diaries vibes! Except it's not Elena, Damon and Stefan! LOL!!

Haru treating her best boys uwu