Commentary for May 10, 2014:

Amazingly, this page took a lot less time to complete than I expected. I'm mostly satisfied with it, but I'm not too keen on how I've drawn General Kochanski's eyes. I'm going to have to try a different approach next page he appears on.

Addendum for November 11, 2019:

In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, I’ve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.