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So, participating in NaNoWriMo, I've decided to write a few short works of fiction for the occasion. And one of my favourite things is and has always been Star Wars, so naturally I decided to indulge myself a bit with a bit of fanfiction featuring Tarvash along with my good friend Jagg whose profile can be found at 
thefellionn.
This also features the longest fight scene I've ever written, and I had a really fun time of it! So without further ado, I present a tale from Star Wars in the era of the Old Republic.
thefellionn.This also features the longest fight scene I've ever written, and I had a really fun time of it! So without further ado, I present a tale from Star Wars in the era of the Old Republic.
Category Story / All
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 125.1 kB
A thoroughly enjoyable read!
You managed to capture how I would imagine a Jagg and Tarvash friendship in the Star Wars universe to function rather perfectly, puns and all.
I was particularly impressed with how well you were able to describe the fight scene. Such scenes typically have a lot of movement involved and it's never easy to capture the minute details needed to make something like it interesting to read, but you pulled it off splendidly.
I also love how you managed to breathe life into the world, the main characters and even the side characters by explaining the politics and reasoning behind everything that was happening and using impactful traits and backstories.
Well done! Your writing skills are something to look up to.
You managed to capture how I would imagine a Jagg and Tarvash friendship in the Star Wars universe to function rather perfectly, puns and all.
I was particularly impressed with how well you were able to describe the fight scene. Such scenes typically have a lot of movement involved and it's never easy to capture the minute details needed to make something like it interesting to read, but you pulled it off splendidly.
I also love how you managed to breathe life into the world, the main characters and even the side characters by explaining the politics and reasoning behind everything that was happening and using impactful traits and backstories.
Well done! Your writing skills are something to look up to.
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