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I look in the mirror and see a different face
This not the person that I am inside at all
I see a girl that is weak and spineless
It is not so I’m a fierce fire that is free
I see a girl that is afraid of what life will bring
I don’t feel this way I face the world head first
I see a girl that hide in time of war and evil
But this not me I never hide form anything
This girl on the outside is not me
I’m a fire that is always burn for fun
I don’t not hide from life or death
This girl in the mirror is not me
Why can’t people see that the outside is not me?
Why can I show the real me that is hidden below?
On the inside I’m this weak girl you see everyday
I’m a girl that will bring Hell to ones that hurt me
I stand out from the crowd
I don’t hide in crowds at all
You learn that I’m this weak scared girl
I’m dangerous girl that live at the edge
The mirror is wrong that girl is not me
I’m break free from this mirror someday
I look in the mirror and see a different face
This not the person that I am inside at all
I see a girl that is weak and spineless
It is not so I’m a fierce fire that is free
I see a girl that is afraid of what life will bring
I don’t feel this way I face the world head first
I see a girl that hide in time of war and evil
But this not me I never hide form anything
This girl on the outside is not me
I’m a fire that is always burn for fun
I don’t not hide from life or death
This girl in the mirror is not me
Why can’t people see that the outside is not me?
Why can I show the real me that is hidden below?
On the inside I’m this weak girl you see everyday
I’m a girl that will bring Hell to ones that hurt me
I stand out from the crowd
I don’t hide in crowds at all
You learn that I’m this weak scared girl
I’m dangerous girl that live at the edge
The mirror is wrong that girl is not me
I’m break free from this mirror someday
Category Poetry / All
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Well, the idea is certainly there but you should try some more rhyming poetry. My only experience is with lyrics so it's a bit more important there. Try to show more without directly exposing your meaning right away. I would like to try to set something of yours to music. What do you think would be best?
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