This pic is so awesome, that it doesn't need any sense :P

thanks but it part of my comic so it ment to be telling abit of a story . But i'm really glad u like it :)

What I can see here is guy wearig fedora, and slashing something with giant claws, probably from the point of view of slashed one :P

it is fairly hard to make out right away. however the interesting elements kept my attention long enough for me to get an idea what exactly was going on. I will add it didn't take long though, longer then most pieces, but its pure grit, even if you could make it out on the fly, your better off taking a moment to take it in.

my 1 problem with it though,

when at the "full" FA size it doesn't look at clear as the thumbnail, i can make it out, but it may be harder for most.

perhaps you can upload at a smaller file size? that way the edges will be more defined.


hope that doesn't sound negative, i really like your work, and when asking for critique i don't like giving out BS answers but rather useful ones.

and to give u an idea, i was looking at it for a few seconds before typing this ^_^ so as i said the style doesn't present that much of a viewing challenge. hope this helps

keep up the work

thanks that awesome. i did put it up on face book which is a smaller image n ppl said lodes of different things so i was thinking...
Since it was part of a comic i was thinking adding a extra page of a mybe a boring but clear picture of what happening n mybe i should of put the page up befor this bit for ppl to look at to see if it flowed. what u think?

perhaps a page with like a mono log, yea that could help.

i wouldn't go to far to simplify it though, like i said its gritty, and you go to far to make it accessible it may lose some of that feeling. (not only for the one page but talking about anytime something like this happens)

but of course thats my opinion, i don't exactly do comics lol