Nothing beat real emotion to inspire the juice of writing. *hugs*

I read part of this. I don't really like reading fight scenes so I got bored after the first few pages. it was like watching someone play a video game only without the watching part...lol...sorry.

it was also a little confusing because it is like the middle of the story and I don't understand the relationships between characters and groups and such.

Your writing of dialogue seemed quite well done, just the storyline did not keep my interest under the ircumstances. I'll make a point to read something else you have written that isn't a battle scene sometime. and maybe when I am not sick. I know I have read poetry and essays you have written but not sure if I have read any actual stories.

Yeah...I actually posted this here because I forsaw loosing my computer. (not litterly...I just had a feeling) And I did loose it. Lol. There were just a few things that I wanted to keep file-wise. I do appreciate that you tried. I do tend to focus on battles more and characters less. It's just my personality. That and it IS right in the middle of the story...actually close to the end. I don't blame you for not getting the things in it.

there's nothing wrong with focusing on battles.

and yeah, I understand about posting just for a backup. I use DA as a back up for my art and writing so I tend to post everything I produce there no matter how bad it is.

it's good to have to change computers or life without one now and then, it makes us realize what's important and what's not, and remember to back up what we value now and then.