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[PCA] Story - Chapter One: Waking Up on the Wrong Side
I haven't yet figured out what to call the overall story yet, but it'll be short.
Well, I mean this chapter is short in itself, but that's just because it's the first one and I need to verify some things first.
Typed this up a while ago, but forgot to post.
Ah, and Tet & Roach, please let me know if you have a problem with my use of your characters. So far I only relayed what happened from past rps, so it's canon, but even so, if you have a problem, just tell me and I'll take it down or rewrite it.
EDIT: Hehe, well, this is weird. Doc or Txt, the apostrophes are having a hard time showing up. Anyone know how to fix that?
Well, I mean this chapter is short in itself, but that's just because it's the first one and I need to verify some things first.
Typed this up a while ago, but forgot to post.
Ah, and Tet & Roach, please let me know if you have a problem with my use of your characters. So far I only relayed what happened from past rps, so it's canon, but even so, if you have a problem, just tell me and I'll take it down or rewrite it.
EDIT: Hehe, well, this is weird. Doc or Txt, the apostrophes are having a hard time showing up. Anyone know how to fix that?
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So far, I like it. You have quite the talent for writing, Kit. Actually I'm surprised you're submitting new PCA stuff right now XD
Hrm... frankly? I don't really like the format files FA supports. When I submit a story, I do it on Word. People can just hit "download" to read the story exactly as I've written it. It helps because you can bold text or use underlines that FA doesn't usually show up in text format.
Hrm... frankly? I don't really like the format files FA supports. When I submit a story, I do it on Word. People can just hit "download" to read the story exactly as I've written it. It helps because you can bold text or use underlines that FA doesn't usually show up in text format.
Talent? Pfft, if I had talent, I'd write more than I rp. XD But really, without you guys, I'm nothing. Nevertheless, thanks for the undeserved compliment, Tallen. <3
Yeah, I'm surprised too, but ever since I was banned from role-playing, I've been having withdrawls and dwelling on stupid things that make me miserable. x_x Which is ironic, because my parents told me to stop rping because they thought that was the cause of my misery/depression. Go figure.
What are the formats it supports? Or rather, what programs create those formats?
Awesome. Yeah, I just wanted to make it a little more convenient, since I know a lot of people are wary about downloadig things...
Thanks!
Yeah, I'm surprised too, but ever since I was banned from role-playing, I've been having withdrawls and dwelling on stupid things that make me miserable. x_x Which is ironic, because my parents told me to stop rping because they thought that was the cause of my misery/depression. Go figure.
What are the formats it supports? Or rather, what programs create those formats?
Awesome. Yeah, I just wanted to make it a little more convenient, since I know a lot of people are wary about downloadig things...
Thanks!
I always come into stories, expecting to find something to rip apart said story on.
However, I should've considered the source. :) The only piece of advice I can give is this. It's a biggie, but all you need is a push in this direction I believe.
Show, don't tell.
You've barely given any specific examples of each of these bits and pieces. HOW did Skylar act not professional? HOW did Skylar act like a fool?
However, it looks like to me that it's more an oversight than an inability to do these things. Take your time.
Also, miss you. *hugs*
However, I should've considered the source. :) The only piece of advice I can give is this. It's a biggie, but all you need is a push in this direction I believe.
Show, don't tell.
You've barely given any specific examples of each of these bits and pieces. HOW did Skylar act not professional? HOW did Skylar act like a fool?
However, it looks like to me that it's more an oversight than an inability to do these things. Take your time.
Also, miss you. *hugs*
Heh, you're always the flatter, JPG.
Either you're being biased or there's not enough of a story yet for you to rip apart. XD That's hardly a fraction of a usual literate post for me, but I needed to stop there before I verified a few events from past rp logs.
Ah, yes...show, don't tell. Thank you. I forgot that. Been a while since I've tried an actual story.
Heh, yeah, I remember he did, I just can't remember how, and that's why I need to go back to re-read those logs. Thanks for the excellent advice. I'll keep it in mind for future chapters and hopefully be able to elaborate on this one.
It's very nice to hear from you. *snugs* ^^ Miss ya too.
Either you're being biased or there's not enough of a story yet for you to rip apart. XD That's hardly a fraction of a usual literate post for me, but I needed to stop there before I verified a few events from past rp logs.
Ah, yes...show, don't tell. Thank you. I forgot that. Been a while since I've tried an actual story.
Heh, yeah, I remember he did, I just can't remember how, and that's why I need to go back to re-read those logs. Thanks for the excellent advice. I'll keep it in mind for future chapters and hopefully be able to elaborate on this one.
It's very nice to hear from you. *snugs* ^^ Miss ya too.
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