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Here is working on visual novel it is demo for test play... , feel free to try and please give feed back after playing via comment... game play about half of chapter 1 and some function still lock like event scene and gallery.
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/nx502aorb.....0demo.zip?dl=0
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download link here
https://www.dropbox.com/s/nx502aorb.....0demo.zip?dl=0
credit for editor
https://twitter.com/bokedaidu
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 1.05 MB
well, game- i mean, VN is good, although there are very few for the demo
nonetheless - plot quality and drawing is cool
and idk it because of the “Update DirectX” error or not, but the scene is bath, where is the hero and Rikiya take together, very blurry, although i see how their emotions are changing, so its okay~
and here is not bigger, but one mistake, if you dont mind (no offense, okay? x)) - replica Kougi in start:
"Hahaha, trust me Raiga, everything's going to be cool.", where Raiga is name, which is actually a mistake, because my name that i have indicated is Groudon
in total - super, if dont pay attention to these two ^^^, ill wait the next version.
good job, Naru :)
nonetheless - plot quality and drawing is cool
and idk it because of the “Update DirectX” error or not, but the scene is bath, where is the hero and Rikiya take together, very blurry, although i see how their emotions are changing, so its okay~
and here is not bigger, but one mistake, if you dont mind (no offense, okay? x)) - replica Kougi in start:
"Hahaha, trust me Raiga, everything's going to be cool.", where Raiga is name, which is actually a mistake, because my name that i have indicated is Groudon
in total - super, if dont pay attention to these two ^^^, ill wait the next version.
good job, Naru :)
Very good so far.
Here is some feedback:
I found two places in the story where the name of the main char hasnt been changed if you would chose your own name.
Other than that its very good.
Another thing i would like to see is an option to use the scroll wheel to reverse the story instead of opening a new page with the latest conversations.
But thats me being picky.
Keep up the good work
Here is some feedback:
I found two places in the story where the name of the main char hasnt been changed if you would chose your own name.
Other than that its very good.
Another thing i would like to see is an option to use the scroll wheel to reverse the story instead of opening a new page with the latest conversations.
But thats me being picky.
Keep up the good work
i currently playing it right now and i'm currently at kougi saying "i'll be careful, thanks for the advice" and so far it is great i love the character designs, the way they interact and with each other i love it. i look forward to what you have install for us with the rest of the game keep up the amazing work in both your art and your VN
I really like the demo.
The characters are great(well...can't really judge Seijirou yet but he look great too),I really enjoy there interaction, not only between Raiga and the love interests but the the ones between the LI too, it makes me want to see scene with them without Raiga, like for exemple some RikiyaxKouji on Seijirou's route, SeijirouxKouji on Rikiya's and RikiyaxSeijirou on Kouji's.
I really enjoy Rikiya hint at his sexuality, we don't if he is the closet, doesn't really accept it or isn't even aware of it, it makes you think about his intention in the shower scene and why he told his story, did he do it to judge Raiga's reaction or did he not have a ulterior motive?
I love the art and the design of the characters but why did you hide the CG?
I hope to see the end of chap 1 soon and GL on this VN.
The characters are great(well...can't really judge Seijirou yet but he look great too),I really enjoy there interaction, not only between Raiga and the love interests but the the ones between the LI too, it makes me want to see scene with them without Raiga, like for exemple some RikiyaxKouji on Seijirou's route, SeijirouxKouji on Rikiya's and RikiyaxSeijirou on Kouji's.
I really enjoy Rikiya hint at his sexuality, we don't if he is the closet, doesn't really accept it or isn't even aware of it, it makes you think about his intention in the shower scene and why he told his story, did he do it to judge Raiga's reaction or did he not have a ulterior motive?
I love the art and the design of the characters but why did you hide the CG?
I hope to see the end of chap 1 soon and GL on this VN.
Feedback:
Line 61: Does not refer to mc as custom mc name. Says "Raiga" instead of [RAI] in the rpy file.
Other than that simple mistake, it's pretty good. The story's well written and the character art is better than what I've used in my visual novel. Would love to see what comes of this game.
Line 61: Does not refer to mc as custom mc name. Says "Raiga" instead of [RAI] in the rpy file.
Other than that simple mistake, it's pretty good. The story's well written and the character art is better than what I've used in my visual novel. Would love to see what comes of this game.
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