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A memento.
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The summer excursions are finished and you've all waited long enough. Let's continue with the story.
I'm feeling pleased with some of the adjustments made to Ven's appearance and just to the style in general. It's been tough juggling a lot of converging plot points (and I'm going to say it will only get more challenging as the chapter continues), but at the same time, I'm having a blast with it.
I always feel a bit awkward having extended periods in a comic without the main character, but it's important that we understand more of the world around Rohan/Aethyr as well. I admit that there have been a couple of things I'd wished I'd more clearly established early on, but nevertheless, I hope that this tale is continuing to gauge everyone's interest.
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A memento.
---
The summer excursions are finished and you've all waited long enough. Let's continue with the story.
I'm feeling pleased with some of the adjustments made to Ven's appearance and just to the style in general. It's been tough juggling a lot of converging plot points (and I'm going to say it will only get more challenging as the chapter continues), but at the same time, I'm having a blast with it.
I always feel a bit awkward having extended periods in a comic without the main character, but it's important that we understand more of the world around Rohan/Aethyr as well. I admit that there have been a couple of things I'd wished I'd more clearly established early on, but nevertheless, I hope that this tale is continuing to gauge everyone's interest.
---
DA archive: https://ryusuta.deviantart.com/gall.....ht-Angel-Comic
FA archive: https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....oonlight-Angel
Tapas archive: https://tapas.io/series/Moonlight-Angel
Support this comic on Patreon!
https://www.patreon.com/ryusuta
Special thanks to:
-PATRONS $2+-
Lethe5683
Mars
Mathias
Lord Hayati
-ENYO PATRONS $10+-
Chrononid
Allen Sniperian
Furreh Izzy
MadTony
Corbyn Prower
-ISTRALA PATRONS $20+-
Prysm Kitsune
Kira the Lucario
Kardia Mari
-ELDER ISTRALA PATRONS $50+-
Noctus Nightflare
Phira Delia
Category All / Transformation
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In my opinion its important to world build just as it is important to flesh out the main cast as the world decides a lot of how everything in setting and how the main characters coheres to it to make sense is incredibly important and one that many novices in this field overlook. Whilst yes its not a requirement, it adds an extra layer of immersion and sense of the world were getting into by doing it, so its a commendable effort by you regardless.
Your welcome considering the comics position overall your doing pretty good I mean in terms of flow its solid. Story holds water to the facts known to cohere to it and no plot holes in sight. As for character portrayal and there personality its spot on especially on this page. From a technical standpoint it does exactly what it sets out to do to convey a unique original story. So that is why I find it so far from a analytical point to be very enjoyable.
How unique well in terms principle its not unheard of to turn into something else through a long listed variety of means, and whilst that same principle is used here the creativity to build completely original things like Enyo Demons and Istrala to put a whole new spin on it, On top of that these creatures despite my long list of knowledge in Demons and occult these 2 never were a thing till I saw this comic so I can implore to tell you your comic stands out because of its completely original creation to it. it gets my attention because the principle I stated before is one of my personal favorites that's why this comic gets my rather hard to attain interest since I see a new original spin on it in this comic.
TL:DR: From an analytical view the comic does what its trying to achieve in a unique way. That and Everything so far looks very solid.
How unique well in terms principle its not unheard of to turn into something else through a long listed variety of means, and whilst that same principle is used here the creativity to build completely original things like Enyo Demons and Istrala to put a whole new spin on it, On top of that these creatures despite my long list of knowledge in Demons and occult these 2 never were a thing till I saw this comic so I can implore to tell you your comic stands out because of its completely original creation to it. it gets my attention because the principle I stated before is one of my personal favorites that's why this comic gets my rather hard to attain interest since I see a new original spin on it in this comic.
TL:DR: From an analytical view the comic does what its trying to achieve in a unique way. That and Everything so far looks very solid.
They do appear to be his glasses, yes. And I'd definitely be curious about what you think the portal is.
The new page should be out for Patrons within the next day or two and a week from tomorrow on FA and DA. The schedule is currently every other Wednesday, and $10+ Patrons get the pages up to a week early. As soon as I get caught up on things and hit the $250 threshold, I should be able to bump up to a weekly schedule again.
Hope that helps!
The new page should be out for Patrons within the next day or two and a week from tomorrow on FA and DA. The schedule is currently every other Wednesday, and $10+ Patrons get the pages up to a week early. As soon as I get caught up on things and hit the $250 threshold, I should be able to bump up to a weekly schedule again.
Hope that helps!
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