It is absolutely great in terms of how you paced the progression in the series, Fluffle. This page is another great example here. We are going from bigger than a mountain to bigger than the planet and then to a size that makes said planet feel like a marble. Even the sun is like a little ball compared to this humongous Totodile. X3
Additionally, the various angles that you display Shiny in, are all looking pretty amazing. Not to mention the way how defined you made a transition from start to finish with his body shape. You can make out how he becomes more and more rounder in shape whish of course fits the aethetic of that surrounding universal shell of scales even better.

Again, I love the galactical elements and in general, your coloring has been very thurough and neatly executed, Fluff. Nice work! The middle panel with the side by side comparisson of the growing Totodude and the planet looks especially nice. =3

I wanna add here also my thanks for the sweet narration inside the submission descriptions. It just sounds very nice and as if it is a very positive and dreamy state that Shiny is shifting through. I definitely still would assume that whatever he can see must be as wonderous and pretty as a nice dream or a night that lets him witness a bunch of beautiful shooting stars to wish upon. (^.=.^)