This actually sounds more like a song rather than a poem
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
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File Size 762 B
Pretty impressive work there. I am not really sure how it sounds like a song but I'll take your word for it. My only suggestion for a change is to make is to change, "Never let it be, never let me see. The hole has light shining down upon me." But besides that good job with this piece.
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