Fresh comm done by Doc000 (www.deviantart.com/doc000)

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I decided it would be nice to have a clean start point for Riley's story. This explains why she was walking around the abandoned building in the actual first part, and introduces a new character, Eliza (she's the tall one).

Eliza is an edgy, cool chick that everyone on campus wants to be friends with. Riley was shocked when Eliza invited her for a night on the town, and said night quickly took her out of her comfort zone. Underage drinking, petty theft, vandalism; it wasn't how her parent's raised her, but she was too intrigued (and desperate for friends) to back out.

It's now getting late into the night, Eliza's true motive is laid plain. Was it all just a game to make a naive young woman do a stupid dare, like some kind of sorority hazing? Unfortunately for Riley, there's no turning back now...