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Started the song when I was drunk. Later when I was sober I started humming something in the car, not knowing where the hell it came from. I went into FL with it thinking hey I can work with this, and gawrsh a-hyuck derp I discover I've already been doing so! brain poison you so silly
Category Music / Techno
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File Size 2.26 MB
There's a lot of chunks I like in this.
The melodies are good all around, as well as a lot of the harmonies per synth.
To me, your strongest sections are from 0:43 on; the melodic line is strong and full of fun slides, and the background synths do a good job of supporting it.
At 1:00, another strong section, the rhythm and the melodies/harmony work well together, without being overpowering.
The last section at 1:17 has an effective lead in to it, and the climax section works really well; there's a lot going on but it works really well in contrast the emptier previous section. I dig a lot.
For constructive criticism, I would point out the first section of the song. When the bass synth comes, and especially when the third synth comes in, it gets pretty complicated in there, making it really hard to decipher what each line is doing. This is fine later when your ear has gotten used to what's going on, but you want to be able to understand the material when it's first presented especially.
I think this is accented the fact that all three parts are functioning independently. Makes it harder to follow when the parts aren't working together; it can be pulled off, but for my first few listen-throughs, that's the vibe I'm getting from it.
Great stuff tho, I definitely love the latter sections. Can't wait to see more from you.
The melodies are good all around, as well as a lot of the harmonies per synth.
To me, your strongest sections are from 0:43 on; the melodic line is strong and full of fun slides, and the background synths do a good job of supporting it.
At 1:00, another strong section, the rhythm and the melodies/harmony work well together, without being overpowering.
The last section at 1:17 has an effective lead in to it, and the climax section works really well; there's a lot going on but it works really well in contrast the emptier previous section. I dig a lot.
For constructive criticism, I would point out the first section of the song. When the bass synth comes, and especially when the third synth comes in, it gets pretty complicated in there, making it really hard to decipher what each line is doing. This is fine later when your ear has gotten used to what's going on, but you want to be able to understand the material when it's first presented especially.
I think this is accented the fact that all three parts are functioning independently. Makes it harder to follow when the parts aren't working together; it can be pulled off, but for my first few listen-throughs, that's the vibe I'm getting from it.
Great stuff tho, I definitely love the latter sections. Can't wait to see more from you.
Aha! I need to friggin' listen to people! That is certainly something I should try to do, clean up my music. I do mash up a bunch of junk into the song all at once. I'm taking that critique to heart when I work on my next projects. And thanks for all the attention you're giving this, it's really a treat for me :D So happy someone cares! XD
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