This is a very good arrangement, and though you may not be a bass or a high tenor, I think you did a pretty good job singing it, and that pitch correction seems to work pretty okay for a free plugin. ^^

So, once the lyrics come in it feels better, but it feels slow at the beginning. Maybe try speeding it up a little bit? Really, the whole song could stand to be a smidgeon faster, but the opening, and parts without lyrics feel like they are dragging.

The arrangement itself is very good, you are good at part writing, so there's not much to say there. If you do decide to make it a bit faster, I think you could use different syllables than just "doo" at the beginning, try some "bup"s or "dat"s. Either way, articulate it to put emphasis on certain notes, like the top note in a run.

Overall, this is a very good arrangement, and I really enjoyed listening. Thanks so much for sharing it! ^^

Thanks for listening and your comments. I wrote the arrangement some time ago, but only recently sat down to record it. I see what you mean about the intro being a bit sluggish. There's some stuff I left out since I was trying to limit the arrangement to the ensemble of a barbershop quartet - did you listen to the original on YouTube?

I also notice that I really need to redo the second verse. I gave that part to the high Tenor voice, and really can't belt out when I'm singing falsetto.

I'll re-record this when I have some time.

Ba da ba dee , ba doo be doo be doot ba....