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The author respectfully requests some form of contact if you intend to produce a derivative work.
The first, and so far only story I have produced set in this particular waterpark. There may be others in the future.
Contains a human to inflatable toy alligator transformation!
The author respectfully requests some form of contact if you intend to produce a derivative work.
The first, and so far only story I have produced set in this particular waterpark. There may be others in the future.
Contains a human to inflatable toy alligator transformation!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 53.7 kB
I happened to find this story on the off-chance. Although I wasn't originally expecting much, I have to say that I found this story awesome!
You use good language, and have no spelling errors (more than I can say for some people, lol) and you genuinely told a good story.
I hope you've got another story coming soon. I can't wait to read it.
:)
You use good language, and have no spelling errors (more than I can say for some people, lol) and you genuinely told a good story.
I hope you've got another story coming soon. I can't wait to read it.
:)
Thank you! Somehow I missed that there was a comment here for the last several years - sorry about that. There was another story in the works, but the characters and plot disagreed with each other, so I didn't finish it. I may return to it someday and see what I can salvage, though. :)
I very wonderful story, I like the whole park thing and like how it inspired other stories. The one disagreement I have at the end he looses mobility and speech. And something interests me, if the employees looked like him how did they not loose their mobility and speech as well?
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