page one Sneek peek
and Sally relaxing in the City when a Dark Figure comes before her
XD I also thought I try a Sonic archie comic look for the first page heh
we got Sally, Runnic, well Robotink XD heheh and the Dark figure and someone other? but who? XP
please tell me you all want this, comic to start ^^ heh
and Sally relaxing in the City when a Dark Figure comes before her
XD I also thought I try a Sonic archie comic look for the first page heh
we got Sally, Runnic, well Robotink XD heheh and the Dark figure and someone other? but who? XP
please tell me you all want this, comic to start ^^ heh
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 930 x 1280px
File Size 261.3 kB
I wanted to write this some time ago, so i do it now, which is just constructive criticism that might improve the quality of your work:
tone down the amount of wrinkles in clothing and body parts. Right now, the hooded cloak looks more like the person is wrapped in dried toilette paper that had been slapped on while wet, rather than a cloak that hangs over the body. Avoid unnecessary folding and other details as they make things look ugly, same for details on bodies, especially genitalia. "Need not, waste not" as they say.
tone down the amount of wrinkles in clothing and body parts. Right now, the hooded cloak looks more like the person is wrapped in dried toilette paper that had been slapped on while wet, rather than a cloak that hangs over the body. Avoid unnecessary folding and other details as they make things look ugly, same for details on bodies, especially genitalia. "Need not, waste not" as they say.
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