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The last of the stories I have to submit tonight. Yeah, its not finished, but the AR is evident isn't it? I wrote this with the inexplicable intention of being read by all audiences, not strictly in the anthro community, so some terms are laid out plainly, like 'headfur' and the anthropomorphism of the subject is introduced rather wordily as well. I got the inspiration to start this after reading a particularly nasty piece of fiction (on another website, don't worry) with terrible abuse and sheer... well, spite, in what was apparently supposed to be a "righteous vengeance" (that's a cold oxymoron if ever I saw one). Thus I invented another Evil Regressor. Eerily similar to "Restoration", "Evanescence" isn't it?
The phrase Dommie Tinnegre is invented slang for the world of anthros in this story. I actually added a footnote of its definition to the document, but just in case that doesn't transfer here's a basic run-down: 'dommie' is an informal insult meaning 'domestic', 'weak', or 'common'. 'Tinnegre' is a term meaning 'mine' or indicating something as being owned.
Poor Eddie, someone's gonna have to come and rescue him- But who? Who is brave enough to defy this powerful vengeful, downright nasty being? ...Seriously, I'm looking for volunteers, I'd be happy to put someone's character into the story. If not, Koopus is more than willing to jump in...
The phrase Dommie Tinnegre is invented slang for the world of anthros in this story. I actually added a footnote of its definition to the document, but just in case that doesn't transfer here's a basic run-down: 'dommie' is an informal insult meaning 'domestic', 'weak', or 'common'. 'Tinnegre' is a term meaning 'mine' or indicating something as being owned.
Poor Eddie, someone's gonna have to come and rescue him- But who? Who is brave enough to defy this powerful vengeful, downright nasty being? ...Seriously, I'm looking for volunteers, I'd be happy to put someone's character into the story. If not, Koopus is more than willing to jump in...
Category Story / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 52 kB
Hmmmm, you do have a way of introducing unnamed, dark shadowy beings who seek to punish those who set themselves pretty high above others, and the like. I'm sort of curious what Edward at "full age" was like, but I can estimate he migth've been those over-sized muscle bound furs ( who I think are big enough to handle a bit of satire, especially in the case of losing all that hard work...). And I know what your talking about. Outside of yours and few other authors in this particular section of the transformation writing community, there are those who tend to go WAY too far in the name of justified revenge when it comes to AR...and I can see where such is...not really a parody, but I can see where you drew upon it here.
I'm intrigued by your addition of a new slang term (got a cockney tinge to it, the Tinnegre bit, but that could me).
As for volunteers...I don't mind, and can see the irony of someone like me, who is very much a runty opposite to what was Edward (the Big Alpha on Campus, I take him to be), save his bacon...although, kind of admit that regression is a cute way of teaching a lesson, but taking it as far as this "self-rightous punisher" is WAY too much...
That and *blush* I'm kind of curious how someone like would right me. Very selfish, I know, but having read your Raisig stories, among your other one short tales, I can't lie and say I never wondered...heh, though,just as flattering to be one of your unknowing "victims" but...I'm rambling again, arent I? Anyway, dark but fascinating read! Can't wait to see more, and I wish you a good day!
I'm intrigued by your addition of a new slang term (got a cockney tinge to it, the Tinnegre bit, but that could me).
As for volunteers...I don't mind, and can see the irony of someone like me, who is very much a runty opposite to what was Edward (the Big Alpha on Campus, I take him to be), save his bacon...although, kind of admit that regression is a cute way of teaching a lesson, but taking it as far as this "self-rightous punisher" is WAY too much...
That and *blush* I'm kind of curious how someone like would right me. Very selfish, I know, but having read your Raisig stories, among your other one short tales, I can't lie and say I never wondered...heh, though,just as flattering to be one of your unknowing "victims" but...I'm rambling again, arent I? Anyway, dark but fascinating read! Can't wait to see more, and I wish you a good day!
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