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Some constructive criticism for you, your dialogue these past few pages has been a little bit wonky especially with your villian restating what was established in the first panel.
Something like "this is the show i was waiting for." Would fit better and not feel as redundant as the current line.
Something like "this is the show i was waiting for." Would fit better and not feel as redundant as the current line.
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